The Secret of Operation Montmartre Revealed! (Story)

Brag · 02-09-07, 11:29 AM

Last week, we left the crew of U-551 in serious trouble. Unable to dive or fight, the mad captain pressed on. Now, we have reached the conclusion of the story:
http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/u551theoutsiderstory.htm

You also get a chance to express your opinion.

John|Blackthorne · 02-09-07, 01:59 PM

Nothing but my sincere congratulations.....i really enjoyed reading your story.
Though I just hate it when i get the "To be continued.." part. :P

Brag · 02-09-07, 02:12 PM

John, thanks for the kind words. My apologies, I missed taking out the to be continued sign. The story is finished and I have added "The End"

John|Blackthorne · 02-09-07, 02:37 PM

Are you planning on starting something new?

Brag · 02-09-07, 02:48 PM

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Originally Posted by John|Blackthorne

Are you planning on starting something new?

Probably, let's see if some idea creeps in.
Meanwhile, I'm thinking of writing something of larger scope. A Novel. presently working at developing a well-rounded protagonist, then the rest of the crew. After Das Boot, it is difficult to come up with something people won't think as junk.

Fenris_Wolf · 11-23-07, 05:44 AM

What!

No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge?

Verdict: FAIL

Brag · 12-03-07, 08:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Fenris_Wolf

What!

No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge?

Verdict: FAIL

I guess, will have to add some more Balz episodes to the webbie.

I'm sure Mohr will want to hang Balz's picture in his radio room. :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:

Brag · 05-03-08, 09:03 AM

If you enjoyed The Outsider you may want to consider reading my published espionage thriller Kingmaker. For info and reviews click:

http://www.amazon.com/Kingmaker-Alex...9823183&sr=8-1

Editorial Reviews
Product Description
Powerful transnational commercial interests manipulate the War on Terror and news media. Cynical former CIA operative John Trager s search for the truth leads him to Africa and the mysterious anthropologist Simone Loriot. Her passionate quest to save her adopted Central African country from looters of natural resources, draw Trager into a violent whirlwind of mercenaries, tribal rivalries and a traitor in The White House. Facing disaster, Trager finds his true self and reason for self-sacrifice.

About the Author
Alexey Braguine flew for a CIA secret airline in Laos, chased elephant poachers in Kenya, led horseback tours into the Chilean Andes. The explosive pages of his novels reveal not only a vivid imagination, but the experience gathered in a thriller life.

STEED · 05-03-08, 09:07 AM

I give you another zombie thread bought back by Brag I can not help but talk about my book.

Brag · 05-04-08, 10:22 AM

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Originally Posted by STEED

I give you another zombie thread bought back by Brag I can not help but talk about my book.

Though I resurected it by mistake, Lots of people flocked to read The Outsider, which is based on a ( I think pre-GWX) patrol.

Jimbuna · 05-04-08, 10:38 AM

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Originally Posted by STEED

I give you another zombie thread bought back by Brag I can not help but talk about my book.

Things must be quiet around the boards at the moment....6 out of the last 10 posts :p

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02-09-07, 11:29 AM	#1
Brag Navy Seal Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Docked on a Russian pond Posts: 7,072 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	The Secret of Operation Montmartre Revealed! (Story) Last week, we left the crew of U-551 in serious trouble. Unable to dive or fight, the mad captain pressed on. Now, we have reached the conclusion of the story: http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/u551theoutsiderstory.htm You also get a chance to express your opinion. __________________ Espionage, adventure, suspense, are just a click away Click here to look inside Brag's book: Amazon.com: Kingmaker: Alexey Braguine: Books Order Kingmaker here: http://www.subsim.com/store.html For Tactics visit:http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/

02-09-07, 01:59 PM	#2
John\|Blackthorne Watch Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Far end of the world... Posts: 30 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	Nothing but my sincere congratulations.....i really enjoyed reading your story. Though I just hate it when i get the "To be continued.." part. :P __________________ "Some ships are designed to sink… others require our assistance." "When you shoot at a destroyer and miss, it's like hit'in a wildcat in the ass with a banjo”

02-09-07, 02:12 PM	#3
Brag Navy Seal Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Docked on a Russian pond Posts: 7,072 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	My Apologies John, thanks for the kind words. My apologies, I missed taking out the to be continued sign. The story is finished and I have added "The End" __________________ Espionage, adventure, suspense, are just a click away Click here to look inside Brag's book: Amazon.com: Kingmaker: Alexey Braguine: Books Order Kingmaker here: http://www.subsim.com/store.html For Tactics visit:http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/

02-09-07, 02:37 PM	#4
John\|Blackthorne Watch Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Far end of the world... Posts: 30 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	Are you planning on starting something new? __________________ "Some ships are designed to sink… others require our assistance." "When you shoot at a destroyer and miss, it's like hit'in a wildcat in the ass with a banjo”

11-23-07, 05:44 AM	#6
Fenris_Wolf Sparky Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 155 Downloads: 10 Uploads: 0	What! No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge? Verdict: FAIL __________________ NO HOOCHIE WOOCHIE - NO LIFE!

05-03-08, 09:03 AM	#8
Brag Navy Seal Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Docked on a Russian pond Posts: 7,072 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	If you enjoyed The Outsider you may want to consider reading my published espionage thriller Kingmaker. For info and reviews click: http://www.amazon.com/Kingmaker-Alex...9823183&sr=8-1 Editorial Reviews Product Description Powerful transnational commercial interests manipulate the War on Terror and news media. Cynical former CIA operative John Trager s search for the truth leads him to Africa and the mysterious anthropologist Simone Loriot. Her passionate quest to save her adopted Central African country from looters of natural resources, draw Trager into a violent whirlwind of mercenaries, tribal rivalries and a traitor in The White House. Facing disaster, Trager finds his true self and reason for self-sacrifice. About the Author Alexey Braguine flew for a CIA secret airline in Laos, chased elephant poachers in Kenya, led horseback tours into the Chilean Andes. The explosive pages of his novels reveal not only a vivid imagination, but the experience gathered in a thriller life. __________________ Espionage, adventure, suspense, are just a click away Click here to look inside Brag's book: Amazon.com: Kingmaker: Alexey Braguine: Books Order Kingmaker here: http://www.subsim.com/store.html For Tactics visit:http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/

05-03-08, 09:07 AM	#9
STEED Lucky Jack Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Down Town UK Posts: 27,695 Downloads: 89 Uploads: 48	I give you another zombie thread bought back by Brag I can not help but talk about my book. __________________ Dr Who rest in peace 1963-2017. To borrow Davros saying...I NAME YOU CHIBNALL THE DESTROYER OF DR WHO YOU KILLED IT!