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04-07-11, 01:43 PM
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Navy Seal
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Looking for a proof reader/fact checker...
As some know I'm writing a paper for my History class on the history of the submarine and I would like a volunteer or two to look over my paper and make sure I didn't make any mistakes (grammatically or factually).
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04-07-11, 02:02 PM
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Silent Hunter
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I'll be happy to proofread. Fact-checking may be beyond my ability, depending upon the detail and scope of your paper.
Heh. Scope. Get it?
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04-07-11, 04:17 PM
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Whoa... Deep, man... that was deeeeep....  Hell, I'll have a go, if you like.
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04-07-11, 04:45 PM
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Hell, I would also like to volunteer - better to have 8 eyes than 6 (no offense if one of you is a pirate
 )my qualifications: - nitpicking, Grammar Nazi - I touched a submarine last year Depending on the length of the paper, I may not be able to respond to you before Saturday, so if you want to submit the paper tomorrow, I won't be much help. |
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04-07-11, 05:11 PM
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Mom lost an eye when she was very young so at that time all you got was a wooden eye. (Plastic was not wide spread back then) She went to a School dance one nite and wanting to dance she asked this guy she was keen on if he would like to dance with her. (He had lost a leg in a farming accident and had a wooden leg) He responded, Would I! Would I! Would I! She responded, PegLeg! PegLeg! PegLeg! And walked away never to talk to him again.
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04-07-11, 08:58 PM
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Ocean Warrior
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I'll take it just for something to read
 If you're OK with that
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