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06-30-06, 12:09 PM
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Ace of the Deep
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You need that Connery line in there. The one about "When he reached the New World, Cortez burned his ships. As a result, his men were well motivated." That would tie together your first and second parts.
And I thought the letter was sent on Friday, and didn't get there until Monday. |
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