Who Started World War II?

[Kazuaki Shimazaki II]

Originally Posted by Fahnenbohn

Translation errors.

Thanks to a very kind english speaker, there must be only a few translation errors. But "errare humanum est".


Part 4.
On the picture : How France hid to the public // and not "was hidden".

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I'll read it. But for now, may I ask WHY this has to be provided as a bunch of PNG files rather than a single Word or PDF format? This makes it substantially harder to read!

Second, I will notice that you taken a lot of time to work through 15 pages. Realistically, I just don't see you finishing your 2nd proof before the 26th.

Let me offer a suggestion. Why don't you write up your 2nd translation in Google Docs and just stick the link here. That way, we can see you working as you translate and we can immediately offer our suggestions and comments to the parts that are finished.