My first (poor) attempt at movie-making

Sir Big Jugs · 03-17-06, 04:02 PM

As you can see, just learning. . .

First day with with Movie Maker today. . .

http://totti.lampisjarvi.googlepages.com/home

Kapitan · 03-17-06, 04:07 PM

Its ok but can you make it so we can acctualy read the writting?

STEED · 03-17-06, 04:17 PM

Early days your get there

Ramius · 03-17-06, 05:40 PM

Good going for a first attempt

@ Kapitan, nothing wrong with the writing for me. Guess you need glasses then :rotfl:

ABBAFAN · 03-18-06, 07:18 AM

very quaint.nice soundtrack.

SUBMAN1 · 03-18-06, 10:49 PM

OK - Problem is, the music, though it is secondary to what it is you are trying to protray, is actually the single most important part!!! I was getting into the mood with the music, and then you cut it off way too soon! Kind of left me hanging!

Is this why people spend 10's of thousands on there sound systems (Me included), yet only a fraction on the video portion? Crap, I only spent $1000 on my DVD player if that tells you anything. My criteria in picking the particular player was more concerned upon its D to A of audio more than its Vid!

The point is - you lack smell, touch, or anything else in your video. The only way to make up for that subconciously (Since sight is you primary sensory input!) is through audio. You portray your video that you want o inject into my brain, but you should also blindside me with the audio to make it stick! You came close (good choice in tracks!), but left me hanging and in a forgettable state! Just my 2 cents.

-S

03-17-06, 04:02 PM	#1
Sir Big Jugs Grey Wolf Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Helsinki, Finland Posts: 895 Downloads: 59 Uploads: 0	My first (poor) attempt at movie-making As you can see, just learning. . . First day with with Movie Maker today. . . http://totti.lampisjarvi.googlepages.com/home __________________

03-17-06, 04:07 PM	#2
Kapitan Sub Test Pilot Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: UK + Canada Posts: 7,130 Downloads: 77 Uploads: 7	Its ok but can you make it so we can acctualy read the writting? __________________ DONT FORGET if you like a post to nominate it by using the blue diamond Find out about Museum Ships here: https://www.museumships.us/ Flickr for all my pictures: https://www.flickr.com/photos/131313936@N03/ Navy general board articles: https://www.navygeneralboard.com/author/aegis/

03-17-06, 04:17 PM	#3
STEED Lucky Jack Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Down Town UK Posts: 27,695 Downloads: 89 Uploads: 48	Early days your get there __________________ Dr Who rest in peace 1963-2017. To borrow Davros saying...I NAME YOU CHIBNALL THE DESTROYER OF DR WHO YOU KILLED IT!

03-17-06, 05:40 PM	#4
Ramius Commander Join Date: May 2001 Location: At sea (again) Posts: 457 Downloads: 43 Uploads: 0	Good going for a first attempt @ Kapitan, nothing wrong with the writing for me. Guess you need glasses then :rotfl: __________________ There is a forgotten, nay even forbidden word, which means more to me than any other. That word is England

03-18-06, 07:18 AM	#5
ABBAFAN Commander Join Date: Sep 2001 Posts: 456 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	very quaint.nice soundtrack. __________________ CHOOSE RFA! LESS GRAFT, MORE PAY.

03-18-06, 10:49 PM	#6
SUBMAN1 Rear Admiral Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 11,866 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	OK - Problem is, the music, though it is secondary to what it is you are trying to protray, is actually the single most important part!!! I was getting into the mood with the music, and then you cut it off way too soon! Kind of left me hanging! Is this why people spend 10's of thousands on there sound systems (Me included), yet only a fraction on the video portion? Crap, I only spent $1000 on my DVD player if that tells you anything. My criteria in picking the particular player was more concerned upon its D to A of audio more than its Vid! The point is - you lack smell, touch, or anything else in your video. The only way to make up for that subconciously (Since sight is you primary sensory input!) is through audio. You portray your video that you want o inject into my brain, but you should also blindside me with the audio to make it stick! You came close (good choice in tracks!), but left me hanging and in a forgettable state! Just my 2 cents. -S __________________