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See index in first post Last edited by Dowly; 05-16-17 at 06:10 PM. |
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See index in first post Last edited by Dowly; 05-16-17 at 06:10 PM. |
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Didn't start as I had planned, I wrote the first two chapters while I was drunk, and they really arent up to par to what I had meant to do. The goal was to write in such way that would be like reading a book or wikipedia, where screenshots/pictures aren't needed. So the story can be imagined by the reader. Like I said, I'll take my time, though with the two first chapters I didn't. I record everything I play, so I can look back to what happened. The first 2 chapters were written from about 20 minutes of footage and there are a lot of things that I should've added but didn't. Character backgrounds and such. Morale of the story: Don't write AARs when you are drunk. ![]() Next update will be within a week. ![]() |
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I see this is starting off real well!
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Don't mistake my kindness for weakness. I'm kind to everyone, but when someone is unkind to me, weak is not what you are going to remember about me. Al Capone |
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Lucky Jack
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Hangovers I spend on the couch, watching The Sopranos for the millionth time.
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Perhaps all those Roman historians from back then also started their writings drunk.
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Lucky Jack
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