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03-18-13, 12:08 PM
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The Old Man
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Well done!
 Some minor suggestions - for grammatical correctness: First document: Im Namen des Führers... "dem" is doubled - keep the printed one.  Second document: "Aufgrund" - one word (today "Auf Grund" is possible, but it wasn't in the `40ies) - "due to/on the basis of" "Ermächtigung" - one word - "authorization" Fourth document:  "das Ritterkreuz des Eiserenen Kreuzes" Fifth document: "das Eichenlaub zum Ritterkreuz des Eisernen Kreuzes"  The real one - not only the "provisonal ownership certificate" (vorläufiges Besitzzeugnis)
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03-18-13, 12:40 PM
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Raiders of the Deep
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This was the feedback that I needed. It took me a long time to match letters to fonts and borders. Then trying to get the spelling right, like in some "l,s, and f" look almost the same, so getting the spelling right was not so easy. Once again thanks for the comments, I will make the changes, and repost the changes.
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 A quote from Donitz; “The reason that the American Navy does so well in wartime is that war is chaos, and the Americans practice chaos on a daily basis.” “For the lessons one fails to learn during peacetime, one pays a high price in war.”
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03-18-13, 03:01 PM
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Raiders of the Deep
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[QUOTE=Mittelwaechter;2027151]Well done!
Some minor suggestions - for grammatical correctness: Second document: "Aufgrund" - one word (today "Auf Grund" is possible, but it wasn't in the `40ies) - "due to/on the basis of" "Ermächtigung" - one word - "authorization" In the Document that I have it shows "Aufgrund", as "Auf Grund" in 1940. All other changes have been made. 
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A quote from Donitz; “The reason that the American Navy does so well in wartime is that war is chaos, and the Americans practice chaos on a daily basis.” “For the lessons one fails to learn during peacetime, one pays a high price in war.”
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