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Old 02-09-09, 11:10 PM   #2
LoBlo
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Again very energetic. Look visuals. Nice capture of the action and this time the music was very suiting.

Good vid. Things that I would suggest (as a viewer). There doesn't seem to be any overarching *theme* to the video or order of scenes. For example: Your last movie was essentially setup as a platform survey, it which all the various platforms were displayed in a sequential fashion each with its own 'drive-by' and ambience... essentially a paradae of platforms if you will.

This set of visual doesn't really seem like a parade, but its not displaying a consistent conflict or story snapshot either, just random picks of various missile firing, then a sub being rammed, and then a typhoon sinking, and then more random missile launches. Maybe a bit more of a 'ministory' or theme to the clip sequence would be more organized. That's my impression anyway.

Overall, good work.
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