My third DW - Movie: Countdown

LoBlo · 02-09-09, 11:10 PM

Again very energetic. Look visuals. Nice capture of the action and this time the music was very suiting.

Good vid. Things that I would suggest (as a viewer). There doesn't seem to be any overarching *theme* to the video or order of scenes. For example: Your last movie was essentially setup as a platform survey, it which all the various platforms were displayed in a sequential fashion each with its own 'drive-by' and ambience... essentially a paradae of platforms if you will.

This set of visual doesn't really seem like a parade, but its not displaying a consistent conflict or story snapshot either, just random picks of various missile firing, then a sub being rammed, and then a typhoon sinking, and then more random missile launches. Maybe a bit more of a 'ministory' or theme to the clip sequence would be more organized. That's my impression anyway.

Overall, good work.

02-09-09, 11:10 PM	#2
LoBlo Subsim Diehard Join Date: May 2006 Location: Texas! Posts: 971 Downloads: 78 Uploads: 3	Again very energetic. Look visuals. Nice capture of the action and this time the music was very suiting. Good vid. Things that I would suggest (as a viewer). There doesn't seem to be any overarching theme to the video or order of scenes. For example: Your last movie was essentially setup as a platform survey, it which all the various platforms were displayed in a sequential fashion each with its own 'drive-by' and ambience... essentially a paradae of platforms if you will. This set of visual doesn't really seem like a parade, but its not displaying a consistent conflict or story snapshot either, just random picks of various missile firing, then a sub being rammed, and then a typhoon sinking, and then more random missile launches. Maybe a bit more of a 'ministory' or theme to the clip sequence would be more organized. That's my impression anyway. Overall, good work. __________________ "Seek not to offend or annoy... only to speak the truth"-a wise man