Balz Meets Hitler (1923)

Rockin Robbins · 05-01-09, 06:04 PM

Fine except that the characters don't ring true. Hitler had no sense of humor whatever. Someone approaching him in that way wouldn't have got the time of day. You're trying to turn Jeffrey Dahmer into Mr Rogers. Even better, trying to turn Karl Marx into Groucho Marx. It just demeans the author and insults the reader. Good writing must contain a germ of truth. This is a travesty. An offensive one.

Adolph Hitler was not Papa Smurf, he was an evil psychopathic god.

05-01-09, 06:04 PM	#5
Rockin Robbins Navy Seal Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: DeLand, FL Posts: 8,900 Downloads: 135 Uploads: 52	Fine except that the characters don't ring true. Hitler had no sense of humor whatever. Someone approaching him in that way wouldn't have got the time of day. You're trying to turn Jeffrey Dahmer into Mr Rogers. Even better, trying to turn Karl Marx into Groucho Marx. It just demeans the author and insults the reader. Good writing must contain a germ of truth. This is a travesty. An offensive one. Adolph Hitler was not Papa Smurf, he was an evil psychopathic god. __________________ Sub Skipper's Bag of Tricks, Slightly Subnuclear Mk 14 & Cutie, Slightly Subnuclear Deck Gun, EZPlot 2.0, TMOPlot, TMOKeys, SH4CMS

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