My second introscreen...

lutzow · 07-28-07, 07:22 AM

I just completed work on my second intro screen.

What you think about thiZ?

A6Intruder · 07-28-07, 08:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lutzow

I just completed work on my second intro screen.

What you think about thiZ?

It is not my taste, we play a sub-game and in my opinion this is a "Comercial-Flyer" for the Organisation Todt

Kind regards

soma · 07-28-07, 08:51 AM

I like the blue background very much (maybe replace the Wehrmacht soldiers on the bottom with a picture of Uboat sailors standing attention on deck?), but the images in the corners I dont really like, they dont give me that special, warm 'Uboat' feeling

Maybe you could use images that are more specific to Uboats, like a nice conning tower emblem (there are tons of 'em)?

By all means, I dont want to discredit your work, it's better than anything I could come up with! But honest feedback is what opens the way to all kinds of new insights,no?

Jimbuna · 07-28-07, 11:08 AM

I appreciate the effort you have put in, but why all the references to 'Todt' ? :hmm:

lutzow · 07-28-07, 06:42 PM

Thanx for your constructive critics CaptainZ. You have the right: there is so much small stuff.
I just wanted to make a THEME screen - you know - screen about
Org.TodT with many small signs and one big thread: Organisation Todt - the German paramilitar working power that construct all GIGANTIC u-boat bunkers.
It's just thematical screen about one important part of U-Boat War...
Commercial-flyer is good name - i wanted make something like this.
Thanks anyway for your opinions - they are very helpful.
I will do my intro-work.

lutzow · 07-29-07, 12:51 AM

And here is DL link
http://files.filefront.com/Lutzow2ndSkrinOrgTodTrar/;8170618;;/fileinfo.html
it is JSGME ready. Have fun.

Reece · 07-29-07, 02:42 AM

Excuse my ignorance, but what is "ORG.TODT"?

Edit: Just found here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Organisation_Todt

Venatore · 07-29-07, 04:46 AM

ahhh, another young jedi modder developing....good to see.

lutzow · 07-29-07, 12:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reece

Excuse my ignorance, but what is "ORG.TODT"?

Edit: Just found here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Organisation_Todt

No comments.

07-28-07, 07:22 AM	#1
lutzow Grey Wolf Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: DanziG Posts: 819 Downloads: 104 Uploads: 0	[REL] My second introscreen... I just completed work on my second intro screen. What you think about thiZ? __________________ Lutzow http://hosted.filefront.com/Lutzow1 Last edited by lutzow; 07-29-07 at 02:02 AM. Reason: correcting

07-28-07, 08:51 AM	#3
soma A-ganger Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: breda, the netherlands Posts: 77 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	I like the blue background very much (maybe replace the Wehrmacht soldiers on the bottom with a picture of Uboat sailors standing attention on deck?), but the images in the corners I dont really like, they dont give me that special, warm 'Uboat' feeling Maybe you could use images that are more specific to Uboats, like a nice conning tower emblem (there are tons of 'em)? By all means, I dont want to discredit your work, it's better than anything I could come up with! But honest feedback is what opens the way to all kinds of new insights,no? __________________ Kretchmer is dead, Lüth is dead, Topp is dead, and I dont feel good also....

07-28-07, 11:08 AM	#4
Jimbuna Chief of the Boat Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: 250 metres below the surface Posts: 190,525 Downloads: 63 Uploads: 13	I appreciate the effort you have put in, but why all the references to 'Todt' ? :hmm: __________________ Wise men speak because they have something to say; Fools because they have to say something. Oh my God, not again!!

07-28-07, 06:42 PM	#5
lutzow Grey Wolf Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: DanziG Posts: 819 Downloads: 104 Uploads: 0	Thanx for your constructive critics CaptainZ. You have the right: there is so much small stuff. I just wanted to make a THEME screen - you know - screen about Org.TodT with many small signs and one big thread: Organisation Todt - the German paramilitar working power that construct all GIGANTIC u-boat bunkers. It's just thematical screen about one important part of U-Boat War... Commercial-flyer is good name - i wanted make something like this. Thanks anyway for your opinions - they are very helpful. I will do my intro-work. __________________ Lutzow http://hosted.filefront.com/Lutzow1 Last edited by lutzow; 07-29-07 at 12:57 AM.

07-29-07, 12:51 AM	#6
lutzow Grey Wolf Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: DanziG Posts: 819 Downloads: 104 Uploads: 0	And here is DL link http://files.filefront.com/Lutzow2ndSkrinOrgTodTrar/;8170618;;/fileinfo.html it is JSGME ready. Have fun. __________________ Lutzow http://hosted.filefront.com/Lutzow1

07-29-07, 02:42 AM	#7
Reece CINC Pacific Fleet Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Down Under Posts: 34,704 Downloads: 171 Uploads: 0	Excuse my ignorance, but what is "ORG.TODT"? Edit: Just found here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Organisation_Todt __________________ *Sub captains go down with their ship!*

07-29-07, 04:46 AM	#8
Venatore Admiral Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Australia:- Sydney Posts: 2,049 Downloads: 68 Uploads: 0	ahhh, another young jedi modder developing....good to see.