[REL] My second introscreen...
 

I just completed work on my second intro screen.
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5...orgtodtsv0.jpg
What you think about thiZ?

It is not my taste, we play a sub-game and in my opinion this is a "Comercial-Flyer" for the Organisation Todt:nope:
Kind regards

I like the blue background very much (maybe replace the Wehrmacht soldiers on the bottom with a picture of Uboat sailors standing attention on deck?), but the images in the corners I dont really like, they dont give me that special, warm 'Uboat' feeling ;) Maybe you could use images that are more specific to Uboats, like a nice conning tower emblem (there are tons of 'em)?

By all means, I dont want to discredit your work, it's better than anything I could come up with! But honest feedback is what opens the way to all kinds of new insights,no? :D

I appreciate the effort you have put in, but why all the references to 'Todt' ? :hmm:

Thanx for your constructive critics CaptainZ. You have the right: there is so much small stuff.
I just wanted to make a THEME screen - you know - screen about
Org.TodT with many small signs and one big thread: Organisation Todt - the German paramilitar working power that construct all GIGANTIC u-boat bunkers.
It's just thematical screen about one important part of U-Boat War...
Commercial-flyer is good name - i wanted make something like this.
Thanks anyway for your opinions - they are very helpful.
I will do my intro-work.

And here is DL link
http://files.filefront.com/Lutzow2ndSkrinOrgTodTrar/;8170618;;/fileinfo.html
it is JSGME ready. Have fun.

Excuse my ignorance, but what is "ORG.TODT"?:-?

Edit: Just found here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Organisation_Todt

ahhh, another young jedi modder developing....good to see.

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