The Secret of Operation Montmartre Revealed! (Story)

Brag · 02-09-07, 11:29 AM

Last week, we left the crew of U-551 in serious trouble. Unable to dive or fight, the mad captain pressed on. Now, we have reached the conclusion of the story:
http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/u551theoutsiderstory.htm

You also get a chance to express your opinion.

John|Blackthorne · 02-09-07, 01:59 PM

Nothing but my sincere congratulations.....i really enjoyed reading your story.
Though I just hate it when i get the "To be continued.." part. :P

Brag · 02-09-07, 02:12 PM

John, thanks for the kind words. My apologies, I missed taking out the to be continued sign. The story is finished and I have added "The End"

John|Blackthorne · 02-09-07, 02:37 PM

Are you planning on starting something new?

Brag · 02-09-07, 02:48 PM

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Originally Posted by John|Blackthorne

Are you planning on starting something new?

Probably, let's see if some idea creeps in.
Meanwhile, I'm thinking of writing something of larger scope. A Novel. presently working at developing a well-rounded protagonist, then the rest of the crew. After Das Boot, it is difficult to come up with something people won't think as junk.

Fenris_Wolf · 11-23-07, 05:44 AM

What!

No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge?

Verdict: FAIL

Brag · 12-03-07, 08:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fenris_Wolf

What!

No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge?

Verdict: FAIL

I guess, will have to add some more Balz episodes to the webbie.

I'm sure Mohr will want to hang Balz's picture in his radio room. :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:

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02-09-07, 11:29 AM	#1
Brag Navy Seal Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Docked on a Russian pond Posts: 7,072 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	The Secret of Operation Montmartre Revealed! (Story) Last week, we left the crew of U-551 in serious trouble. Unable to dive or fight, the mad captain pressed on. Now, we have reached the conclusion of the story: http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/u551theoutsiderstory.htm You also get a chance to express your opinion. __________________ Espionage, adventure, suspense, are just a click away Click here to look inside Brag's book: Amazon.com: Kingmaker: Alexey Braguine: Books Order Kingmaker here: http://www.subsim.com/store.html For Tactics visit:http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/

02-09-07, 01:59 PM	#2
John\|Blackthorne Watch Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Far end of the world... Posts: 30 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	Nothing but my sincere congratulations.....i really enjoyed reading your story. Though I just hate it when i get the "To be continued.." part. :P __________________ "Some ships are designed to sink… others require our assistance." "When you shoot at a destroyer and miss, it's like hit'in a wildcat in the ass with a banjo”

02-09-07, 02:12 PM	#3
Brag Navy Seal Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Docked on a Russian pond Posts: 7,072 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	My Apologies John, thanks for the kind words. My apologies, I missed taking out the to be continued sign. The story is finished and I have added "The End" __________________ Espionage, adventure, suspense, are just a click away Click here to look inside Brag's book: Amazon.com: Kingmaker: Alexey Braguine: Books Order Kingmaker here: http://www.subsim.com/store.html For Tactics visit:http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/

02-09-07, 02:37 PM	#4
John\|Blackthorne Watch Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Far end of the world... Posts: 30 Downloads: 2 Uploads: 0	Are you planning on starting something new? __________________ "Some ships are designed to sink… others require our assistance." "When you shoot at a destroyer and miss, it's like hit'in a wildcat in the ass with a banjo”

11-23-07, 05:44 AM	#6
Fenris_Wolf Sparky Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 155 Downloads: 10 Uploads: 0	What! No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge? Verdict: FAIL __________________ NO HOOCHIE WOOCHIE - NO LIFE!