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Old 02-23-08, 12:55 PM   #1
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Its great.




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Old 02-23-08, 01:06 PM   #2
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I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?
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Old 02-23-08, 02:16 PM   #3
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Old 02-23-08, 02:59 PM   #4
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I agree so I edited it.

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Old 02-23-08, 03:05 PM   #5
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Great w/ROW.

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Old 02-23-08, 05:21 PM   #7
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Spelling and punctuation was dead on.
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This is the death of the english language! Or so my English Lit teacher used to say.
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Old 02-27-08, 09:12 AM   #9
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Spelling and punctuation was dead on.
I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.
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I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?
I agree so I edited it.

"Great".
It will lose the interest of the reader if it is too detailed. New edit:
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I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?
I agree so I edited it.

"Great".
It will lose the interest of the reader if it is too detailed. New edit:
"eat"
Hmmm....time for a sandwich.
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Old 02-27-08, 03:17 PM   #12
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Spelling and punctuation was dead on.
I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.

Steve, what would I do without you?
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I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?
I agree so I edited it.

"Great".
It will lose the interest of the reader if it is too detailed. New edit:
"eat"
Hmmm....time for a sandwich.

I just had a shreded cheese and steak burrito and it was "GREAT"
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Spelling and punctuation was dead on.
I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.

Steve, what would I do without you?
Well, I'll tell you what you can do with me: call me on the part where I wrote 'the' instead of 'he'. :rotfl:
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Old 02-27-08, 03:53 PM   #15
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Spelling and punctuation was dead on.
I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.
Steve, what would I do without you?
Well, I'll tell you what you can do with me: call me on the part where I wrote 'the' instead of 'he'. :rotfl:

We must have gone to different high schools together :rotfl:
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