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Kapitan_Phillips

02-23-08 12:55 PM

My SH4 Review

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Its great.

:lol:;)

Platapus

02-23-08 01:06 PM

I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?

Kapitan_Phillips

02-23-08 02:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Platapus

I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?

:yep:

TDK1044

02-23-08 02:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Platapus

I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?

I agree so I edited it.

"Great".

Torps

02-23-08 03:05 PM

hmm

Great w/ROW.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5358/rowci1.jpg

stabiz

02-23-08 05:15 PM

:rotfl:

AVGWarhawk

02-23-08 05:21 PM

Spelling and punctuation was dead on.:up:

DavyJonesFootlocker

02-27-08 08:25 AM

This is the death of the english language! Or so my English Lit teacher used to say.

Sailor Steve

02-27-08 09:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AVGWarhawk

Spelling and punctuation was dead on.:up:

I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.

Rockin Robbins

02-27-08 10:25 AM

Close but still too long

Quote:

Originally Posted by TDK1044

Quote:

Originally Posted by Platapus

I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?

I agree so I edited it.

"Great".

It will lose the interest of the reader if it is too detailed. New edit:
"eat"

Torvald Von Mansee

02-27-08 10:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rockin Robbins

Quote:

Originally Posted by TDK1044

Quote:

Originally Posted by Platapus

I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?

I agree so I edited it.

"Great".

It will lose the interest of the reader if it is too detailed. New edit:
"eat"

Hmmm....time for a sandwich.

AVGWarhawk

02-27-08 03:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sailor Steve

Quote:

Originally Posted by AVGWarhawk

Spelling and punctuation was dead on.:up:

I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.

Steve, what would I do without you?

FIREWALL

02-27-08 03:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Torvald Von Mansee

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rockin Robbins

Quote:

Originally Posted by TDK1044

Quote:

Originally Posted by Platapus

I liked your review, but it was a little wordy. Can you shorten it a bit and get to the point a little quicker?

I agree so I edited it.

"Great".

It will lose the interest of the reader if it is too detailed. New edit:
"eat"

Hmmm....time for a sandwich.

I just had a shreded cheese and steak burrito and it was "GREAT" :D

Sailor Steve

02-27-08 03:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AVGWarhawk

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sailor Steve

Quote:

Originally Posted by AVGWarhawk

Spelling and punctuation was dead on.:up:

I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.

Steve, what would I do without you?

Well, I'll tell you what you can do with me: call me on the part where I wrote 'the' instead of 'he'.:oops: :damn: :rotfl:

AVGWarhawk

02-27-08 03:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sailor Steve

Quote:

Originally Posted by AVGWarhawk

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sailor Steve

Quote:

Originally Posted by AVGWarhawk

Spelling and punctuation was dead on.:up:

I wish I had you for an English teacher. Actually the left the apostrophe out of 'it's'.

Steve, what would I do without you?

Well, I'll tell you what you can do with me: call me on the part where I wrote 'the' instead of 'he'.:oops: :damn: :rotfl:

We must have gone to different high schools together :rotfl:

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