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09-27-06, 12:44 PM
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Ace of the Deep
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Nice. I like all u-boat stories. BUT, make sure you continue with some action. OK, descriptions are nice and show with what detail you can continue your writing, so write a battle report (sinking ships, destroyers hunting you,... that kind of stuff), add a bit of personal drama, and VOULA, you have yourself a nice little story!
Keep on writing lad! |
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