english reaserch paper

VonHammer · 11-29-07, 09:34 AM

well i have posted a thread on here a month or so ago askiing for help with an reaserch paper im doing for my english 101 class. well heres the first draft of it. the two formats below are both in MS Word, one in Word 2007 (the version i did it in) and Word 97-2003 some features my not show up. and any comments are welcome, i spent almost two whole days working on it and my first draft isnt due till next tuesday and i need to knock down the word count some. so feel free to add your comments!

you can also im me if you want a copy

capt_frank · 11-29-07, 10:08 AM

checkum email kimosabe...

frank a/k/a rangooon

capt_frank · 11-29-07, 10:56 AM

Great read! I encourage all the members to request a copy and to offer your comments!

VonHammer · 11-29-07, 12:02 PM

thank you i would like some more comments to! you can pm if you want a copy. just be sure that you mention what word processer you use so i can save it in that format. it was done in Word 2007. also in your pm please include an adress so i cna send it to you right away!

VonHammer · 11-29-07, 02:23 PM

bump

brandtryan · 11-29-07, 03:33 PM

It certainly looks like you did your research. The only suggestion I have: give it to someone for a grammar/spell check. I used to be a freshman composition teacher--and nothing annoys more, especially with the auto tools you can use in Word!

Aside from those few issues--a very informative read. Good luck!

VonHammer · 11-29-07, 04:03 PM

ok thank you for that info. can you be morespecfic in what areas?

brandtryan · 11-29-07, 06:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by VonHammer

ok thank you for that info. can you be morespecfic in what areas?

lol, I knew you were going to ask that.

Just have someone look at it--there are some missing words--and some incomplete sentences. Read it out loud slowly and I'm sure you'll catch them! Do you have a language lab/writing center at your school? Usually someone there would look it over for you.

Unfortunately, I can't fix it for you!

brandtryan · 11-29-07, 06:06 PM

Geez--that really makes me look like an *ss -- it's just that alot of students get away with having people "fix" their papers--and they never learn how to write on their own. I'm not saying you're doing that--just an old habit.

VonHammer · 11-29-07, 06:51 PM

wel when when i do the final draft ill make sure that my grammers ok.

VonHammer · 12-06-07, 10:21 AM

bump

11-29-07, 09:34 AM	#1
VonHammer Engineer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 218 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	english reaserch paper well i have posted a thread on here a month or so ago askiing for help with an reaserch paper im doing for my english 101 class. well heres the first draft of it. the two formats below are both in MS Word, one in Word 2007 (the version i did it in) and Word 97-2003 some features my not show up. and any comments are welcome, i spent almost two whole days working on it and my first draft isnt due till next tuesday and i need to knock down the word count some. so feel free to add your comments! you can also im me if you want a copy Last edited by VonHammer; 11-29-07 at 12:03 PM.

11-29-07, 12:02 PM	#4
VonHammer Engineer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 218 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	thank you i would like some more comments to! you can pm if you want a copy. just be sure that you mention what word processer you use so i can save it in that format. it was done in Word 2007. also in your pm please include an adress so i cna send it to you right away! Last edited by VonHammer; 11-29-07 at 02:02 PM.

11-29-07, 10:08 AM	#2
capt_frank Watch Officer Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: In the North Carolina Sticks Posts: 335 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	checkum email kimosabe... frank a/k/a rangooon

11-29-07, 10:56 AM	#3
capt_frank Watch Officer Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: In the North Carolina Sticks Posts: 335 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	Great read! I encourage all the members to request a copy and to offer your comments!

11-29-07, 02:23 PM	#5
VonHammer Engineer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 218 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	bump

11-29-07, 03:33 PM	#6
brandtryan Engineer Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Indianapolis, United States Posts: 214 Downloads: 122 Uploads: 0	It certainly looks like you did your research. The only suggestion I have: give it to someone for a grammar/spell check. I used to be a freshman composition teacher--and nothing annoys more, especially with the auto tools you can use in Word! Aside from those few issues--a very informative read. Good luck!

11-29-07, 04:03 PM	#7
VonHammer Engineer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 218 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	ok thank you for that info. can you be morespecfic in what areas?

11-29-07, 06:06 PM	#9
brandtryan Engineer Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Indianapolis, United States Posts: 214 Downloads: 122 Uploads: 0	Geez--that really makes me look like an *ss -- it's just that alot of students get away with having people "fix" their papers--and they never learn how to write on their own. I'm not saying you're doing that--just an old habit.

11-29-07, 06:51 PM	#10
VonHammer Engineer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 218 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	wel when when i do the final draft ill make sure that my grammers ok.

12-06-07, 10:21 AM	#11
VonHammer Engineer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 218 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	bump