The patrol !

JCWolf · 04-11-07, 07:13 PM

Hello guys,
Long ago i've decided to write a story based on
one of my U-boat patrols, but I didn't whanted to
just write a kind of reporte telling storie, I started to
pull for my imagination and fixed finally a overview
of what i whanted...

This is just the Introdution of what I still have to
write and develop, but one thing I'm sure....

.....It will be big!

This will be posted at my main site on the Handbook pages

Some screens.

Ok 2 new pages were added to the Hand book here

http://www.jcwolfworkshopbdu.com/jcw_1.html

The patrol first Chapter its here on the third page of the handbook:

http://www.jcwolfworkshopbdu.com/jcw_4a.html

Alex · 04-12-07, 06:18 PM

Just one thing to say : let us know what happened to these mates !

Truely a great start, man !

VipertheSniper · 04-12-07, 06:20 PM

Need a correction reader?

JCWolf · 04-13-07, 09:15 AM

Updated at first post

Soon it will be available the first chapter at my Handbook web site ...

No need for any correction reader...

I have My own ways thanks...

ReallyDedPoet · 04-13-07, 09:19 AM

Nice idea Jcwolf, great site by the way

danlisa · 04-13-07, 10:17 AM

Very Nice, JC

However, the text is hard to read on page 3.

There are better things that can go on Page 3!:rotfl::rotfl:

Keep it up mate.

Jimbuna · 04-13-07, 01:11 PM

Cool JC....real professional looking...I like it mate

JCWolf · 04-13-07, 06:35 PM

Its hard to read here mate, its a screene, and not the real size bro, in the real page it will be very clear brother...

Thanks guys

...

mr chris · 04-14-07, 06:22 AM

Real great read keep it up JC

JCWolf · 04-14-07, 07:49 PM

First Chapter as been out and ready to reed!

Update on the first post with the links also to some new content on the HandBook!

Hope you like it.

TarJak · 04-15-07, 08:11 AM

Nice work.

JCWolf · 04-16-07, 05:40 AM

Thanks guys,
I'm writting chapter 2
and it will go slow as I whant to be as more
imersive as I can so... soon....

Jimbuna · 04-16-07, 03:45 PM

Be sure to post it over at 'The Den' first for beta reading purposes

JCWolf · 04-17-07, 02:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jimbuna

Be sure to post it over at 'The Den' first for beta reading purposes

:rotfl: :rotfl: sure why not!

04-11-07, 07:13 PM	#1
JCWolf Admiral Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Spain , Crossing Gibraltar! Posts: 2,292 Downloads: 202 Uploads: 1	The patrol ! Hello guys, Long ago i've decided to write a story based on one of my U-boat patrols, but I didn't whanted to just write a kind of reporte telling storie, I started to pull for my imagination and fixed finally a overview of what i whanted... This is just the Introdution of what I still have to write and develop, but one thing I'm sure.... .....It will be big! This will be posted at my main site on the Handbook pages Some screens. Ok 2 new pages were added to the Hand book here http://www.jcwolfworkshopbdu.com/jcw_1.html The patrol first Chapter its here on the third page of the handbook: http://www.jcwolfworkshopbdu.com/jcw_4a.html __________________ JCWolf Mediafire SHIII Page User name : JCWolf Password : stefre@jcm Last edited by JCWolf; 04-14-07 at 07:47 PM.

04-12-07, 06:18 PM	#2
Alex Dominant Wolf Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 2,143 Downloads: 30 Uploads: 0	Just one thing to say : let us know what happened to these mates ! Truely a great start, man ! __________________

04-13-07, 09:15 AM	#4
JCWolf Admiral Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Spain , Crossing Gibraltar! Posts: 2,292 Downloads: 202 Uploads: 1	Updated at first post Soon it will be available the first chapter at my Handbook web site ... No need for any correction reader... I have My own ways thanks... __________________ JCWolf Mediafire SHIII Page User name : JCWolf Password : stefre@jcm

04-13-07, 09:19 AM	#5
ReallyDedPoet Canadian Wolf Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada. The one and only, East Coast Posts: 10,885 Downloads: 946 Uploads: 5	Nice idea Jcwolf, great site by the way __________________ Back in the Day

04-13-07, 10:17 AM	#6
danlisa Navy Seal Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Cornwall, UK Posts: 5,499 Downloads: 45 Uploads: 1	Very Nice, JC However, the text is hard to read on page 3. There are better things that can go on Page 3!:rotfl::rotfl: Keep it up mate. __________________

04-12-07, 06:20 PM	#3
VipertheSniper Ace of the Deep Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Austria Posts: 1,070 Downloads: 0 Uploads: 0	Need a correction reader?

04-13-07, 01:11 PM	#7
Jimbuna Chief of the Boat Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: 250 metres below the surface Posts: 190,500 Downloads: 63 Uploads: 13	Cool JC....real professional looking...I like it mate __________________ Wise men speak because they have something to say; Fools because they have to say something. Oh my God, not again!!

04-13-07, 06:35 PM	#8
JCWolf Admiral Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Spain , Crossing Gibraltar! Posts: 2,292 Downloads: 202 Uploads: 1	Its hard to read here mate, its a screene, and not the real size bro, in the real page it will be very clear brother... Thanks guys ... __________________ JCWolf Mediafire SHIII Page User name : JCWolf Password : stefre@jcm

04-14-07, 06:22 AM	#9
mr chris Silent Hunter Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Herefordshire, England Posts: 3,562 Downloads: 216 Uploads: 0	Real great read keep it up JC __________________

04-14-07, 07:49 PM	#10
JCWolf Admiral Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Spain , Crossing Gibraltar! Posts: 2,292 Downloads: 202 Uploads: 1	The Patrol First Chapter as been out and ready to reed! Update on the first post with the links also to some new content on the HandBook! Hope you like it. __________________ JCWolf Mediafire SHIII Page User name : JCWolf Password : stefre@jcm

04-15-07, 08:11 AM	#11
TarJak Fleet Admiral Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 17,052 Downloads: 150 Uploads: 8	Nice work.

04-16-07, 05:40 AM	#12
JCWolf Admiral Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Spain , Crossing Gibraltar! Posts: 2,292 Downloads: 202 Uploads: 1	Thanks guys, I'm writting chapter 2 and it will go slow as I whant to be as more imersive as I can so... soon.... __________________ JCWolf Mediafire SHIII Page User name : JCWolf Password : stefre@jcm

04-16-07, 03:45 PM	#13
Jimbuna Chief of the Boat Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: 250 metres below the surface Posts: 190,500 Downloads: 63 Uploads: 13	Be sure to post it over at 'The Den' first for beta reading purposes __________________ Wise men speak because they have something to say; Fools because they have to say something. Oh my God, not again!!

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