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Old 03-18-13, 12:40 PM   #7
Reinhard Hardegen
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Originally Posted by Mittelwaechter View Post
Well done!

Some minor suggestions - for grammatical correctness:

First document:

Im Namen des Führers...

"dem" is doubled - keep the printed one.



Second document:

"Aufgrund" - one word (today "Auf Grund" is possible, but it wasn't in the `40ies) - "due to/on the basis of"

"Ermächtigung" - one word - "authorization"

Fourth document:



"das Ritterkreuz des Eiserenen Kreuzes"

Fifth document:

"das Eichenlaub zum Ritterkreuz des Eisernen Kreuzes"



The real one - not only the "provisonal ownership certificate" (vorläufiges Besitzzeugnis)
First of all thank you all for your comments.

This was the feedback that I needed. It took me a long time to match letters to fonts and borders. Then trying to get the spelling right, like in some "l,s, and f" look almost the same, so getting the spelling right was not so easy.

Once again thanks for the comments, I will make the changes, and repost the changes.
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