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Mittelwaechter · 03-18-13, 12:08 PM

Well done!

Some minor suggestions - for grammatical correctness:

First document:

Im Namen des Führers...

"dem" is doubled - keep the printed one.

Second document:

"Aufgrund" - one word (today "Auf Grund" is possible, but it wasn't in the `40ies) - "due to/on the basis of"

"Ermächtigung" - one word - "authorization"

Fourth document:

"das Ritterkreuz des Eiserenen Kreuzes"

Fifth document:

"das Eichenlaub zum Ritterkreuz des Eisernen Kreuzes"

The real one - not only the "provisonal ownership certificate" (vorläufiges Besitzzeugnis)

03-18-13, 12:08 PM	#6
Mittelwaechter The Old Man Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 1,304 Downloads: 35 Uploads: 0	Well done! Some minor suggestions - for grammatical correctness: First document: Im Namen des Führers... "dem" is doubled - keep the printed one. Second document: "Aufgrund" - one word (today "Auf Grund" is possible, but it wasn't in the `40ies) - "due to/on the basis of" "Ermächtigung" - one word - "authorization" Fourth document: "das Ritterkreuz des Eiserenen Kreuzes" Fifth document: "das Eichenlaub zum Ritterkreuz des Eisernen Kreuzes" The real one - not only the "provisonal ownership certificate" (vorläufiges Besitzzeugnis) __________________ 10 happy wolves rear 90 blinded, ensnared sheep. 90 happy sheep banish the wolves. Arrest the 1% - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQ6hg1oNeGE