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Brag
02-09-07, 11:29 AM
Last week, we left the crew of U-551 in serious trouble. Unable to dive or fight, the mad captain pressed on. Now, we have reached the conclusion of the story:
http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/u551theoutsiderstory.htm (http://www.freewebs.com/kielman/u551theoutsiderstory.htm)



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John|Blackthorne
02-09-07, 01:59 PM
Nothing but my sincere congratulations.....i really enjoyed reading your story.
Though I just hate it when i get the "To be continued.." part. :P

Brag
02-09-07, 02:12 PM
John, thanks for the kind words. My apologies, I missed taking out the to be continued sign. The story is finished and I have added "The End" :oops:

John|Blackthorne
02-09-07, 02:37 PM
Are you planning on starting something new?

Brag
02-09-07, 02:48 PM
Are you planning on starting something new?

Probably, let's see if some idea creeps in.
Meanwhile, I'm thinking of writing something of larger scope. A Novel. presently working at developing a well-rounded protagonist, then the rest of the crew. After Das Boot, it is difficult to come up with something people won't think as junk. :roll:

Fenris_Wolf
11-23-07, 05:44 AM
What!

No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge? :o

Verdict: FAIL :down:

Brag
12-03-07, 08:35 AM
What!

No news of the upcoming "hoochie-woochie ihr gesicht mein frachter" choir, no christmas tree with pink pajamas santa on the bridge? :o

Verdict: FAIL :down:

I guess, will have to add some more Balz episodes to the webbie. :dead: I'm sure Mohr will want to hang Balz's picture in his radio room. :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:

Brag
05-03-08, 09:03 AM
If you enjoyed The Outsider you may want to consider reading my published espionage thriller Kingmaker. For info and reviews click:

http://www.amazon.com/Kingmaker-Alexey-Braguine/dp/0980073340/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1209823183&sr=8-1

Editorial Reviews
Product Description
Powerful transnational commercial interests manipulate the War on Terror and news media. Cynical former CIA operative John Trager s search for the truth leads him to Africa and the mysterious anthropologist Simone Loriot. Her passionate quest to save her adopted Central African country from looters of natural resources, draw Trager into a violent whirlwind of mercenaries, tribal rivalries and a traitor in The White House. Facing disaster, Trager finds his true self and reason for self-sacrifice.

About the Author
Alexey Braguine flew for a CIA secret airline in Laos, chased elephant poachers in Kenya, led horseback tours into the Chilean Andes. The explosive pages of his novels reveal not only a vivid imagination, but the experience gathered in a thriller life.

STEED
05-03-08, 09:07 AM
I give you another zombie thread bought back by Brag I can not help but talk about my book. :lol:

Brag
05-04-08, 10:22 AM
I give you another zombie thread bought back by Brag I can not help but talk about my book. :lol:

Though I resurected it by mistake, Lots of people flocked to read The Outsider, which is based on a ( I think pre-GWX) patrol.

Jimbuna
05-04-08, 10:38 AM
I give you another zombie thread bought back by Brag I can not help but talk about my book. :lol:

Things must be quiet around the boards at the moment....6 out of the last 10 posts :p