U995 video peer review

McBeck · 06-11-19, 05:19 PM

I need a peer review of a video I made of the U995.

Can you watch it and let me know of any obvious mistakes I made?
(I already have Christmas tree=trimtanks) on my list

Other feedback is welcome

Commander Wallace · 06-13-19, 07:35 AM

I think you did a great job on the narrative and video tour. To be honest, this was very much like a history channel documentary. Lots of information presented. I will watch this a few more times.

Nice job

Jimbuna · 06-13-19, 10:04 AM

Yes, great job

Rockstar · 06-13-19, 04:19 PM

hate to be a critic, but

After watching the video I would change the intro. To me the bit about the 40,000 sailors seems out of place with the rest of the video. Since the video doesn't mention anything about them again.

Your tour of U 995 is more about the boat itself. Maybe introduction could include commissioning/decommissioning dates, commanding officers, or any notable operations it took part in.

Buddahaid · 06-13-19, 09:19 PM

I loved the tour. The intro as stated above doesn't connect well with the rest of the video and mimics the beginning of Das Boot. It's not that the facts are irrelevant, because they are, but they may work better as a conclusion after seeing the interior and restricted living conditions. Perhaps the intro could delve more into this particular subs construction and service life, then move to the tour and conclude with the awful facts of survival.

06-11-19, 05:19 PM	#1
McBeck Admiral Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Denmark Posts: 2,023 Downloads: 15 Uploads: 0	U995 video peer review I need a peer review of a video I made of the U995. Can you watch it and let me know of any obvious mistakes I made? (I already have Christmas tree=trimtanks) on my list Other feedback is welcome __________________ "I like subcommanders...they dont have time for bull**!" Proud member of the Subsim army of zombies Becks website

06-13-19, 10:04 AM	#3
Jimbuna Chief of the Boat Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: 250 metres below the surface Posts: 181,006 Downloads: 63 Uploads: 13	Yes, great job __________________ Wise men speak because they have something to say; Fools because they have to say something. Oh my God, not again!! GWX3.0 Download Page - Donation/instant access to GWX (Help SubSim)

06-13-19, 04:19 PM	#4
Rockstar Rear Admiral Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Zendia Bar & Grill Posts: 11,812 Downloads: 10 Uploads: 0	hate to be a critic, but After watching the video I would change the intro. To me the bit about the 40,000 sailors seems out of place with the rest of the video. Since the video doesn't mention anything about them again. Your tour of U 995 is more about the boat itself. Maybe introduction could include commissioning/decommissioning dates, commanding officers, or any notable operations it took part in. __________________ Guardian of the honey and nuts Let's assume I'm right, it'll save time.

06-13-19, 09:19 PM	#5
Buddahaid Shark above Space Chicken Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 8,552 Downloads: 160 Uploads: 0	I loved the tour. The intro as stated above doesn't connect well with the rest of the video and mimics the beginning of Das Boot. It's not that the facts are irrelevant, because they are, but they may work better as a conclusion after seeing the interior and restricted living conditions. Perhaps the intro could delve more into this particular subs construction and service life, then move to the tour and conclude with the awful facts of survival. __________________ "However vast the darkness, we must provide our own light." Stanley Kubrick "Tomorrow belongs to those who can hear it coming." David Bowie

06-13-19, 07:35 AM	#2
Commander Wallace Navy Seal Join Date: Oct 2012 Location: Under the sea in an Octupus garden in the shade Posts: 5,014 Downloads: 360 Uploads: 0	I think you did a great job on the narrative and video tour. To be honest, this was very much like a history channel documentary. Lots of information presented. I will watch this a few more times. Nice job