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Originally Posted by Typical Russian
Guys, we need help. We will be very grateful if you check and correct the text for the game. Thank in advance.
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I'll try to give a hand though some of these are hard as I don't know the context (how they are being used in the game), and I have not played this game. Italics are the original version, regular bold text is my suggestions, anything in () is my comments or questions.
Blockade doesn't allow to move the unit to this place.
A Blockade is preventing you from moving the unit to this location.
Siege doesn't allow to move the unit to this place.
A Siege is preventing you from moving the unit to this location.
Only amphibian units can land to harbor directly.
(I don't understand this one, an amphibian unit is something that can go from the water onto the land and drive around on the land. Are you talking about landing troops on a beach, or docking in the harbor to unload troops?)
Can't move units without warships in enemies harbor.
(I don't understand this one either, do you mean you need to have your own warships in the enemy harbor before you can move non-warships into the harbor? or do you mean there need to be warships in the group of ships you are moving into the harbor)
The ships can be moved only between specialized slots and can't move here.
(no idea what this is supposed to mean)
The ships can be moved only between the slots of your state and can't move here.
(no idea what this is supposed to mean)
The characteristic of seaworthiness don't allow to move the ship to this place.
You cannot move this ship as it is not seaworthy. (I am assuming you mean the ship cannot be moved or it will sink).
Can't repair ships here.
You cannot repair your ships here. (it would be helpful to say why you can't)
War News!!! Warships USS Hartford and USS Brooklyn hits a mine and sunk at the entrance to Mobile harbor.
News from the War!!! The warships USS Hartford and USS Brooklyn have been sunk by mines at the entrance to the harbor in Mobile, Alabama. (I am assuming they did not both hit the same mine together).
Successful torpedo boat attack on a warship! Blockader USS Hartford sank near Mobile harbor.
A torpedo boat has attacked and sunk the USS Hartford! It sank outside Mobile, Alabama, which it had been blockading. (I am assuming here that the USS Hartford was blockading Mobile at the time it was attacked)
Damages less than XX percents doesn't need to be repaired.
Damage below (or 'above', it depends on if the percentage gets bigger or smaller the more a ship is damaged)
XX percent do not need to be repaired. (does this mean it is not necessary to repair it, or that the game will not let you repair it?)
Not enough money to repair the warship.
You do not have enough money to repair this warship.
Don't need to reinforce infantry regiment.
You cannot reinforce this infantry regiment, as it is already at maximum size. (I am assuming here that the infantry unit is already full)
Not enough money to reinforce infantry regiment.
You do not have enough money to reinforce this infantry regiment.
Drag the warship's plan on free dock slot in the same harbor as plan.
Drag the plan for the warship to a free dock slot in the same harbor the plan comes from. (do docks have more then one slot? also are plans tied to individual harbors, meaning that the plan can be used at that harbor only?)
Not enough money to build the warship.
You do not have enough money to build this warship.
Harbor under attack! No possible to laid down a warship.
You cannot build any warships at this harbor because it is under attack. (does the game stop all warship construction when the harbor is under attack?, or can you continue to build ones that had already been laid down)
Harbor under siege! No possible to laid down a warship.
You cannot build any warships at this harbor because it is under siege. (does the game stop all warship construction when the harbor is under attack?, or can you continue to build ones that had already been laid down)
Drag the infantry regiment's plan on free barrack slot in the same harbor as plan.
Drag the infantry regiment's plan to a free barracks slot in the same harbor the plan comes from. (do barracks have more then one slot? also are plans tied to a specific harbors, meaning that the plan can be used at that harbor only?)
Not enough money to train the infantry regiment.
You do not have enough money to create this infantry regiment.
Harbor under attack! No possible to reinforce an infantry regiment.
You cannot reinforce this infantry regiment at this harbor as it is under attack.
Warship USS Hartford headed to New York dry dock for repairs. Works are expected to cost XX and take XX months.
The warship USS Hartford has headed to the New York City dry docks for repairs. The repairs are expected to cost XX and should take XX months to complete. (is this a News event, or something else. Also is the ship in the process of going to new york, or is it there already?)
The new warship USS Hartford was laid down at New York shipyard. Works are expected to cost XX and take XX months.
The new warship USS Hartford has been laid down at the New York City shipyards. The construction is expected to cost XX and will take XX months to build.
All the works was done. The warship %s was commissioned into active service.
The construction and fitting-out of the warship %s has been completed, and has been commissioned into active service.
Defensive works enable only for siege side.
(I don't understand this at all, please explain under what circumstances this message appears in game)
To build defence construction needs at least one infantry regiment in erea.
To be able to build defensive constructions, you need to have at least one infantry regiment in the area. (what is 'defence construction'?)
Soldiers from the 1st Alabama Infantry arrive at Mobile training camp to reinforcement (cost XX, XX months).
Soldiers from the 1st Alabama Infantry Regiment have arrived at the training camp in Mobile, Alabama for reinforcement. It is expected to cost XX, and take XX months to complete.
1st Alabama Infantry recruited and headed to training camp. Training are expected to cost XX and take %d months.
The 1st Alabama Infantry Regiment has completed recruitment and is heading to the training camp in Mobile, Alabama. Training is expected to cost XX, and will take XX months to complete.
The 1st Alabama Infantry was organized at Mobile and ready for action.
The 1st Alabama Infantry Regiment has been organized at Mobile, Alabama, and is ready for action. (do you mean they have finished training?)
Anyhow I'll be happy to make edits to what I suggested if you can provide more information to my comments/questions, I need to be able to understand what is happening in game to be able to properly fix it.