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Old 11-09-20, 08:22 PM   #3
rentacow
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I look forward to hearing what you think!

BTW, small design flaw on my part: all of the pop-up messages can be hard to distinguish the end of one, and the start of another. There is some key text early in the mission that MAY be overlooked.

This text is simply instructions to STOP and WAIT 5 MINUTES near the middle of the grid squares indicated. A pop-up message will let you know when the 5 minutes has passed and the goal is completed.

Hopefully this saves some confusion. Otherwise, the rest of the mission should run smooth.



EDIT: After some playtesting, it seems there may be at least two important pop-up messages which can easily be overlooked due to my mediocre design. While playing this mission, whenever in doubt, please just carefully read back through the message log and check if some instructions got "buried" by additional flavor text. I have learned an important design lesson: important text cannot be immediately followed by text of no consequence.

Last edited by rentacow; 11-10-20 at 10:05 PM.
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