The tower bridge looks fine to me. And the sternwalk - very nice! The photo of
Warspite in the Grand Harbour has a little bit of an optical illusion going on...the plans are more accurate.
Just wondering - have you stretched the ship at all? They were a bit longer and beamier than the
Revenge class, which was one of the reasons that they had more refit potential.
The torpedo bulges of the
QEs were much less prominent than the ones on the
Revenge class.
The stern rangefinder should be more or less the same one on the
Revenge model. There was a much more modern one mounted atop the "Queen Anne's Mansions" bridge structure.
Warspite also had x4 dual 4in guns mounted on the gunwales, two per side - exactly the same turrets that you get on the
Hunt class. Don't know how easy it is to drop them in but they're pretty essential - they performed very well on D-Day. Check out the plans to see placement.
Looks fantastic so far - you deserve a medal for getting to this stage after so many other dropped out
As for monitors, it'd be great to see them. They were specifically designed for inshore operations and as designed were enormously resistant to torpedoes - huge, er,
bulges on them. The
Roberts class are one of my favourite warship types - x2 15in guns, x8 4in, x16 pom-poms and about 20 Oerlikons on an 8000-ton ship? Yeeha.

HMS
Roberts

HMS
Erebus