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Originally Posted by Brag
Suggestion to writing Kaleuns:
1.) make your paragraphs short (empty spaces invite the eye to read)
2.) Avoid the passive voice like the plague ( the convoy was attacked--the toast was buttered) In active voice: Balz attacked the convoy. Bernard buttered the toast.  |
Appriciate the tips, and after writing that i can add a 3rd lol. View as a preview before submitting
