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Originally Posted by ATR-42
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Originally Posted by Gunfighter
"He Gave So Much To So Many
Now He Has Gone
Grieve Not You Fellow Captains
His Reflection Will Live On"
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... Although im not crazy about 'gone' but it is well said by you..
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How about
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"He Gave So Much To So Many
Now He Has Gone Beyond
Grieve Not You Fellow Captains
His Reflection Will Live On"
The addition of "beyond" maybe softens the "Gone"...just a suggestion.