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Originally Posted by VonHammer
ok thank you for that info. can you be morespecfic in what areas?
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lol, I
knew you were going to ask that.
Just have someone look at it--there are some missing words--and some incomplete sentences. Read it out loud slowly and I'm sure you'll catch them! Do you have a language lab/writing center at your school? Usually someone there would look it over for you.
Unfortunately, I can't fix it for you!
