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Originally Posted by Q3ark
What did you think of my story? Hope it wasn't too long for you, I have never tried writing about my video game experiences before but was having a blast and I wanted to share it with all at subsim.
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Not bad at all. We all like to do this sort of thing from time to time. I have started one just today called "Raid on Rabul". It will take me a few days to finish the whole thing.
Only suggestion I might make is the use of paragraphs. The first wall of text is a little hard to get through.
