Looks very, very nice, I like it!
But another suggestion (see your Post # 40, picture 2):
- Possible to bring the Text "Oberleuntnant z.S. Johnathan" (here as example) more centrally?
It is a little bit too wide on the left side!
- German translation for the text on the little book:
Left side:
Heute Navigation
[I would it underline as a heading]
Dauert 8 Stunden, und später Waffen Kunde.
Right side:
Mein erster Tag in dieser Akademie, hoffentlich erhalte ich gute Noten in allen Prüfungen und bestehe den Lehrgang.