Great start.
Tutorials are always welcome (some of us think that we have the slightest idea what we're doing
) and someone clean up the spilled drink and glass Austria just dropped or this floor will get sticky.
As for styles I tend to be a bit full of myself when I have something report from within the game in the most Prussian way I can imagine you know pompous, knowing it better and a lot of self importance. At least I try to make it sound like that but still have to get used to writing AAR reports especially flavouring it up with a bit of a tongue in cheek way of an approach.