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Old 10-22-13, 03:46 PM   #9
Red October1984
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Originally Posted by Armistead View Post
I see a nervous captain that has never gotten any attention from females.
Maybe your crew should be nervous instead......

I don't see this ending well...
Mabye it'll have a twist where he discovers his confidence and overcomes the struggle...

Maybe I'll throw in some other things...

We'll just have to wait and see.

I tried to make him come across as a nervous regular guy who was never done much with his life except excel in his schoolwork.

I guess we'll have to wait for installment #3. This might be relatively long because of the speed of the S-boat and how much time I have. I'm shooting for at least 3 patrols.
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