Nice account!
I enjoyed it as well as your first one, but there are some aspects I would improve:
- you should really use IRAI and some other realism mod. The carnages you are reporting in your eloquent writing style, are a bit too much even for Happy Times, and they spoil the immersion
- gathering your short tales into one thread would also be of some benefit, giving the impression that they are sketches of the same big picture. If it was on me, I would put an index in the first post, with links to each chapter.
- though not indispensable, one or two screen captures for each tale, depicting the most salient situations, would aso be nice. Maybe slightly photoshopped to look like vintage photographs or free-hand drawings
