Absolutely beautiful! It's been a long time since we've had some new screens, and yours were worth the wait.
Downloads?
Also, quite some time ago I created a 'Loading Screens' mod using existing screens at that time and SH3 Commander, and added in 25 different marches for the dockside band to play at random. You can get it here:
http://www.subsim.com/radioroom/down...o=file&id=2822
The good news is that some of the screens in the mod are repeats and some are not as good as others, so yours can be slotted right in.