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Old 01-19-06, 05:09 AM   #10
jumpy
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Originally Posted by Oberon
Sounds like an Edexcel exam :hmm:
Sounds like a piece of crap!

Being somewhat 'oldskool' when it comes to the written word I find this kind of thing to be a goodly deal below par when it comes to talent, creativity and learning... if that were all there is to 'creative writing' we'd all be churning this guff out by the bucket load and living the life of riley- I'm assuming this is from some kind of english paper? Where's the shakespear!? This has none of the style and finness that language is all about, nor any of the embellishments wich (for me anyway) make reading such a joy and pleasure, not just some mindless ejaculation of seemingly unrelated nouns and verbs spooging accross the page like so much good intention, curling the pages of my soul as it dries. Bah! Humbug.

Read, article, blinked, slowly, huffed, thought, derogatory, reply, quick, typed, scathing, scoff, question, asking, literature, gone. Considered, scroats, maturing, education, waste, books, time, effort, failing, understand, standards, shortfall, load, rubbish, supprise, none.

Sorry, rant over
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