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NeonSamurai · 02-25-11, 09:23 AM

I give it a D- for being somewhat understandable. Lost a lot of marks though for mixing up indiscretion with indignation in the beginning. I felt that one word really set the pace for the entire letter.

02-25-11, 09:23 AM	#6
NeonSamurai Ocean Warrior Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Socialist Republic of Kanadia Posts: 3,044 Downloads: 25 Uploads: 0	I give it a D- for being somewhat understandable. Lost a lot of marks though for mixing up indiscretion with indignation in the beginning. I felt that one word really set the pace for the entire letter. __________________ SH3 Newbie Guide Links and other helpfull stuff