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Originally Posted by subchaser12
I can help you with the title.
More Right Wing Paranoia
Relax guys, Russia went to Cuba, I really don't think we need to start digging trenches at Disneyland just yet. If there is a World War 3 the US better not be involved. They can't even handle an insurgency in Iraq with RPGs and AK-47s. China would smoke the US military.
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If you're going to comment at least put some substance in your posts.
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Now having read through all the posts and seeing that most people have already pointed out the obvious mistakes in the pieces that you've shown us I have a few questions:
What is your goal in this Paper? Are you bound by page or word count limitations or by a narrow subject field?
What are the points you are trying to get across and what mechanisms do you intend to use in order to tranfer those ideas and concepts onto paper?
Do you plan on being short and to the point or do you plan on being a little more elaborate and descript on current, past and their possible influences on future events?
Just feeling around to see exactly what it is you're trying to do here.