Nice song i really like it in general.
Would make it a bit shorter tho-this drum machine is killing it.
If you want to have it this long you need to have more going on in the song.
Specially after 3 40.
Just an opinion.

Good on ya.:up:

Great lyrics, good voice..:yeah:

Thanks guys, yes I agree that the song arrangement needs work to make it a bit shorter and about the drum machine, I haven't got my head around programming drums yet so I was just using a basic beat and it shows. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

Personally I like long songs, except when they're repetitive, which yours wasn't.

I finally caved in and submitted to a Google stripsearch account, mainly so I could put up some new videos myself. But I posted on yours too. :D

Thanks Sailor Steve, really appreciate you taking the time to comment after already commenting here. Cheers matey. I like longer songs too, but this one could use a little tightening up in places, not a major cut but a little trimming would make the song flow easier. :up: