My first (poor) attempt at movie-making

[Sir Big Jugs]

As you can see, just learning. . .

First day with with Movie Maker today. . .

http://totti.lampisjarvi.googlepages.com/home

[Kapitan]

Its ok but can you make it so we can acctualy read the writting?

[STEED]

Early days your get there :yep:

[Ramius]

Good going for a first attempt :up: :up:


@ Kapitan, nothing wrong with the writing for me. Guess you need glasses then :rotfl:

[ABBAFAN]

very quaint.nice soundtrack.

[SUBMAN1]

OK - Problem is, the music, though it is secondary to what it is you are trying to protray, is actually the single most important part!!! I was getting into the mood with the music, and then you cut it off way too soon! Kind of left me hanging!

Is this why people spend 10's of thousands on there sound systems (Me included), yet only a fraction on the video portion? Crap, I only spent $1000 on my DVD player if that tells you anything. My criteria in picking the particular player was more concerned upon its D to A of audio more than its Vid!

The point is - you lack smell, touch, or anything else in your video. The only way to make up for that subconciously (Since sight is you primary sensory input!) is through audio. You portray your video that you want o inject into my brain, but you should also blindside me with the audio to make it stick! You came close (good choice in tracks!), but left me hanging and in a forgettable state! Just my 2 cents.

-S