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Missing Name
01-26-11, 08:45 PM
Oh. Look. I'm trying to write fiction again. I got bored after only one entry in my first try, so of course I'm writing another tale.

This one is from the viewpoint of Commander Richards, commander of the Clemson-class destroyer Parker. Ship and people names have been completely made up; please ignore those historical inaccuracies.

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"Six."

"I'm sorry, sir, did you say something?"

"No, Lieutenant. Carry on." The navigator turned back to the table, modifying the route they would be taking. It was about 2600 kilometers from Miami to Halifax. From there, they would join up with a larger convoy and head to England.

Commander Richards sighed and looked around the harbor. Ahead of him, docked at Port Island, was the crude oil tanker Mondgreen. Directly behind it was the convoy tender Cordo, loading the last of her supplies. The USS Hatcher was moored alongside.

The rest of the ships were lined up along the north side of Fisher Island. The Choctaw was the oldest, a steamer from 1910. She was carrying a load of scrap metal and was to be scrapped herself upon arriving in Halifax. Next was the big collier Binghamton, not much younger than the Choctaw. The boilers were in poor shape and were due to be replaced. Until then, she had to be make do with patches. She was carrying partially assembled PBY Cats. A Canadian cargo ship loaded with foodstuffs... what was her name? Mary Le Crans? Lacrosse? Mary L-something. Richards scratched his head. Damn, he was tired. Finally there was a smallish tanker loaded with fuel-oil, the Delila.

Six nice-looking targets to be escorted by two obsolete flush-deckers with minimal equipment. The Hatcher was fine considering the burden being placed upon her, but the Parker's rudder was jamming. With no time to fix it, Richards could only turn in slow circles and hope the rudder wouldn't stick. The Navy was overburdened and every floating ship was needed.

"Six ships, and I'm crippled. Christ."

"Sir, you're talking to yourself again. Get some sleep." Lt. Singer didn't even look up from his charts. "We leave before the sun comes up, remember."

He's right. Sleep sounds good.

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At 0400, the convoy was ready to leave Miami. It had assembled outside the channel and was only waiting for the go-ahead.

Hatcher led the way, with the merchants in two lines behind her. To the Hatcher's port, the Binghamton, Staeder and Mary Lacroix waited; the Mondgreen, Delila and Choctaw opposite. Richards brought up the rear with the cranky Parker.

The captain of the Binghamton had said he was unsure how long the boilers would last at full speed. She would make seven knots, max. The largest target in the convoy was also the one slowing the entire thing down. Wonderful.

From the Hatcher, a signal:

COMMANDER RICHARDS PREPARATIONS COMPLETE

"Scotch, ask Commander Wiley what the hell he is waiting for." Scotch grinned and started flicking the signal lamp. Having an old friend working escort duty with him was somewhat comforting.

LETS GET THIS RODEO GOING

"Yes, lets." Richards picked up the phone. "Grant! We're moving! Ahead one-quarter."

"Aye aye sir."

This is going to be one hell of a rodeo, Richards thought as the convoy sailed past the beach.

Gargamel
01-26-11, 09:13 PM
ooooooh nice! New fiction with a different point of view!

Hmmmm.... I'm beginning to realize something about you MN.... Maybe that's why you had the extra deck gun mounted on your U-boat.... Destroyer commander at heart!

Missing Name
01-27-11, 12:40 AM
ooooooh nice! New fiction with a different point of view!

Hmmmm.... I'm beginning to realize something about you MN.... Maybe that's why you had the extra deck gun mounted on your U-boat.... Destroyer commander at heart!

Hmm, I suppose that is better suited to me. After all, I do sometimes like to run flank on the surface, firing the gun while letting loose the torpedoes. Very DD-ish strategy, now that I think about it. A destroyer could take more surface-fire damage than a U-boat...

Schwieger
01-27-11, 07:54 AM
Hmm, I suppose that is better suited to me. After all, I do sometimes like to run flank on the surface, firing the gun while letting loose the torpedoes. Very DD-ish strategy, now that I think about it. A destroyer could take more surface-fire damage than a U-boat...

Where was that pic... oh yea,

http://i748.photobucket.com/albums/xx128/Schwieger/SH3Img16-1-2011_02953_258.jpg?t=1295159607

Missing Name
01-27-11, 09:23 AM
...wait, you've actually taken on capital ships? I haven't done that... yet.

desirableroasted
01-27-11, 11:19 AM
...wait, you've actually taken on capital ships? I haven't done that... yet.

If you are eager to try, be up at Narvik on 13 April 1940. You will get to take on a British BB, 8 DDs and some Fairey Swordfish in 12m of water. Pretty harrowing, but you have German DDs backing you (maybe, depending on how the battle on the 10th went) & it actually is doable.

Missing Name
01-27-11, 03:54 PM
The sea remained surprisingly calm for the first two days. Clear skies kept everyone's mood up and the lack of waves meant men weren't throwing up everywhere. As usual, Seaman Davis was already clearing everybody's pockets at Texas Hold'em.

Unfortunately, the convoy was moving even slower than planned. The Binghamton's boilers had started to deteriorate even further at around 0200 of the third day, with only four out of a possible six functioning. Progress slowed to only about five knots, pushing the trip from the expected six days remaining to eleven. The Binghamton's captain was making arrangements to break off and head to Roanoke.

A heavy storm was expected to roll over sometime late on the third day. Commander Richards gritted his teeth. The Binghamton was currently in no shape to weather rough seas; in fact, she shouldn't have even left Miami. But war tends to make everything more urgent.

At least we have plenty of seasickness meds. It's a good thing Doc has his sources.

Missing Name
01-29-11, 12:50 PM
"I can't see a damn thing, sir."

The storm had first manifested as a solid black line on the horizon at around 1700. It quickly caught up and heavy winds began to drive the rain almost sideways.

It was now 2118, with visibility at zero.

"S***, I can't even see the bow." Foster was in the watchtower, a position no one envied. The waves were making the boat rock about twenty degrees to either side. The forward gun position was taken off duty, seeing how it was underwater half of the time. There wasn't a dry place on the boat.

Richards picked up the phone receiver, which had fallen off the hook for the umpteenth time that evening. No sooner had he replaced it when another huge wave rocked the boat and sent the phone flying again.

Lt. Singer was attempting to eat his supper. It was difficult to keep his plate level, and with each wave a few more peas fell off.

"Try mixing them with the taters. Acts like a glue." Cookie was scooping some onto a plate for Richards. "I shouldn't have made peas today, but hell. They were the only fresh veggies left."

A soaking wet Foster stumbled onto the bridge. "It's no use sir, no one would be able to see us even if they wanted to. Cookie, gimme a plate of those mashies. I'm starved."

Hickok turned away from the radio. "I don't understand how you never get sick up in that crow's nest. I've hurled three times already, and not because of the food."

"Hey! I make good chow."

"These mashies can't be beat." Foster was somehow managing to stay upright, ignoring the boat's movements. "Even better than my Gramma's."

"That may be, but it still doesn't answer my question."

Richards chuckled and handed his empty plate back to Cookie. "I'm going to the head."

Unsurprisingly, the floor was covered in vomit. What did amaze him was the vomit on the ceiling. The commander finished his business and opened the door. Two more men were waiting outside, neither of them in a laughing mood.

"She's all yours, gentlemen," Richards said with a smile.

The distress call from the Choctaw came in at 0504.