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GDFTigerTank
03-23-10, 07:57 AM
Inspired by, "I'm the Galloping Ghost of the Japanese Coast".
I thought we needed a Kriegsmarine equivalent, and so here it is:

I’M A SILENT HUNTER


I’m a silent hunter and I prowl the murky deep,

My name’s a thing of nightmares sailors mutter in their sleep.

Pray we never meet, should you venture forth and sail,

For few of those who cross my path have lived to tell the tale.



Our home’s a concrete block, in the French port of Le’Harve,

From which my kin and I sortie, to make old Churchill starve.

Those Brits they used to bomb it – we just sat inside and laughed,

Till they realized their lame attempts were really rather daft.



Forty-seven souls call my steel belly home,

They’re my only company for the lonely months we’ll roam.

First I get provisioned, and tanks filled to the brim,

Then they load the eels, and check my fighting trim.



Eventually the time has come, the diesels roar to life.

The harlots wave, the band plays on, beside Herr Kaleun’s wife.

My crew waves back and promise, “they’ll make it back alright.”

Now pulling away from shore, we’ve soon moved out of sight.



We were only two days out before I got to bite,

Into a little rusty freighter off the scenic Isle of Wight.

One week later, undeterred, I cruised the Irish coast,

Three tankers which we found there, I happily turned to toast.



Happy Times await us all out in the vast Atlantic.

Fat convoys, panicked crews, destroyer escorts frantic!

The smell of burning diesel oil permeates the air,

Wherever our valiant wolf-pack brings its guns to bear.



But yesterday we lost U-20, to a flying boat,

It came down quick, dropped two bombs, and left nothing afloat.

A few days before they ran down Willie by his periscope,

The oil slick we later found indeed leaves little hope.



Slowly things are changing - good friends do not come back.

Their empty berths are filled with strangers, good at talking smack.

That will change quite quickly when the depth-charges start to fall,

And with some luck we’ll win this game, ere death can take us all.



I’m a silent hunter and I prowl the murky deep,

My name’s a thing of nightmares sailors mutter in their sleep.

Pray we never meet, should you venture forth and sail,

For few of those who cross my path have lived to tell the tale.




~GDFTigerTank (2010)

captainprid
03-23-10, 08:14 AM
Brilliant!!

mookiemookie
03-23-10, 08:21 AM
Outstanding! Worthy of a sticky! :yeah::salute:

Jimbuna
03-23-10, 08:47 AM
Very good http://www.psionguild.org/forums/images/smilies/wolfsmilies/pirate.gif

GDFTigerTank
03-23-10, 11:43 AM
Glad you guys like it! :salute:

Sailor Steve
03-23-10, 12:10 PM
Absolutely perfect!:rock:

coronas
03-23-10, 02:39 PM
Good, very good!
:salute:

Dowly
03-23-10, 02:50 PM
Horrible crash, from the bunk I fell
Crew came screaming; all is not well
Bernard's on watch, we're going to hell

:smug:

GDFTigerTank
03-23-10, 02:56 PM
Horrible crash, from the bunk I fell
Crew came screaming; all is not well
Bernard's on watch, we're going to hell

:smug:

Fancy the fickle Finnish Ferret's fine flowery* flourish! :up:

Edit: * "flowery" with /sarcasm tags

robbo180265
03-23-10, 03:16 PM
Nice work matey:up:

Sailor Steve
03-23-10, 03:42 PM
Fancy the fickle Finnish Ferret's fine flowery* flourish! :up:

Edit: * "flowery" with /sarcasm tags
And an added altogether alliterative addition!:D

sergei
03-23-10, 04:02 PM
Good work GDFTigerTank.
And an honorable mention for Dowly's contribution.

Jimbuna
03-23-10, 04:13 PM
The Finnish ferret sat on watch all night
Some thought it strange but knew it right
All during his watch he never moved
His steely gaze they thought improved

The morning came
And then he rose
The crew then realised he looked comotose

So now they knew why he was sat on his bum
Because he'd thieved some of Capt. jimbunas rum

http://www.abfnet.com/forum/images/smilies/pirate_with_bottle_of_rum_lg_blk.gif

Dowly
03-23-10, 04:16 PM
:haha::haha:

Jimbuna
03-23-10, 04:31 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2772/thumbsupgv0.gif

Falkirion
03-23-10, 05:42 PM
Great work guys.

Lanzfeld
03-23-10, 07:04 PM
The DRM blows
The frames are real slow
My wallet will remain locked.:up:

Too vulgar.
The Management

mookiemookie
03-23-10, 07:06 PM
garbage

Post reported. :nope:

Lanzfeld
03-23-10, 07:08 PM
gone

Onkel Neal
03-23-10, 09:46 PM
Inspired by, "I'm the Galloping Ghost of the Japanese Coast".
I thought we needed a Kriegsmarine equivalent, and so here it is:


I’M A SILENT HUNTER





I’m a silent hunter and I prowl the murky deep,




My name’s a thing of nightmares sailors mutter in their sleep.




Pray we never meet, should you venture forth and sail,






Very nice, mate! :salute:

Onkel Neal
03-23-10, 09:47 PM
The DRM blows
The frames are real slow
My wallet will remain locked.:up:

Too vulgar.
The Management

Here's what's about to happen, you will lose access to this forum if you keep this up. You've been here since 2002, you know better.