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the.terrabyte.pirate
09-23-09, 07:37 AM
The diary of Oberfahnrich Hans Dietrichs, Navigator aboard the IIB U-11.

31 July 1939

Dear Liesa.

We were all sorry to farewell Kaulein Mann, but it was for the best. He may have believed that the posting at the academy was a step back, but I believe that it may have extended his life for another few years. His arthritis was getting worse, and we could all see he was having difficulty climbing up and down the conning tower. It may have been a blow to his pride, but being able to use his vast experience training future boat commanders will be of more value to the fatherland than having him potter about in this old tub.

Soon after that we lost our first watch officer Leutnant Bauer to a promotion and the command of a new Type V, and he took our Chief Engineer Leutnant Weiss with him. For three days Leutnant Hart was in command, but then he two was transferred to a new boat. That left me as the senior ranking officer. Can you believe it? My first (temporary) command.

A shame the boat was tied to the wharf the whole time.

Two days ago we received an unofficial visit from a Leutnant Fritz Marbach, who turned out to be our replacement Chief Engineer. I was busy at the time with the workmen scampering over the boat like fleas, and the first I knew about him was walking into the engine room and discovering him tapping away at the diesels with a spanner, while Baldow (covered in grease) sheepishly watched on. He seems a nice enough sort, doesn't seem to care that much for protocol, and Baldow tells me he knows his way around an engine room. The engine crew aren't that easy to impress, but I've never seen the engines look that clean, or the crew that dirty.

I met Kaulein Waltenburg early yesterday morning. He arrived with our new First Officer Oberleutnant Arendt. I understand that the two of them were serving together before being assigned to the U-11. The Oberleutnant began by asking me a flood of questions about the boat and the repairwork being undertaken. It was almost an interrogation. Meanwhile the Kaulein, glared about the command room like he could smell something bad. The collar of his jacket was turned up against his cheeks, and his hands were buried deep in his pockets. He occasionally muttered under his breath as he inspected the various dials and pipework. His first name is Kurt, and according to Hoffmann "Kurt" in English means rude and abrupt. Dittermann agreed that the name was appropriate. I get the feeling that he is not impressed by the U-11. Maybe he feels dishonored by being assigned an old coastal boat.

The final member of the command crew, Leutnant Kaeding, our Second Watch Officer, arrived with a crash that afternoon when he fell down the conning tower ladder. No damage apart from a sprained wrist, but Oberleutnant Arendt sent him directly to his bunk to rest. "Rest" in this case meant "Sober up". Arendt was discreet enough, but the smell on his breath was unmistakable. I'd hate to be in Kaeding's place tomorrow when he meets the Kaulein.

Speaking of tomorrow, Arendt has advised that as soon as the workmen have finished we will be leaving Kiel on a five day shakedown cruise. I almost feel like the crew of the U-11 are my responsibility, and I am worried about how they will react to the new command crew. Mann and Waltenburg are poles apart.

As always, I am missing you terribly Liesa. I hope your father is feeling better.

Your in love,

Hans.

bojan811
09-23-09, 03:17 PM
:yeah:
Nice...

the.terrabyte.pirate
09-24-09, 03:44 AM
1 September 1939.

Dear Liesa.

I'd hoped to see you again before we left, but there was simply no time. The Oberleutnant demanded the workmen have the boat seaworthy by midnight, and whipped them all the way. To his credit he succeeded, but I can't help feeling that the work was rushed, and the boat may be at risk because of this. I also can't help but feel that Arendt thinks me lazy for not having the work finished before he arrived.

I was atop the conning tower smoking and watching Arendt usher the workmen ashore when another Kaulein hailed us from the dock. I thought he was hailing me, until I heard the Waltenburg's voice reply from over my shoulder. Over the noise of the docks I had not heard the Kaulein climb up the ladder from below.

"They have you playing with toys now?" called up the stranger mockingly. Why don't you get a real boat, Walty?"

I tried to fade into the background.

Waltenburg simply spat over the side, and gestured down with his cigarette. "I don't need a big boat", he replied cooly. "I have a big white cock."

The other officer laughed and walked away.

I leaned over my side of the conning tower to look. During the night the workmen had painted a new emblem on the conning tower of the boat. It was the shape of a running rooster, painted white and outlined in black.

Waltenburg finished his cigarette and slipped back down to the command room. I waited several minutes before following.

Just before 0300 Arendt told me to plot a course out of Kiel, and out through the canal. We cast off soon afterwards, with the sounds of a band playing from the wharf. Arendt personally woke Kaeding and sent him up for the first watch shift. It was Arendt who took us out of harbour, and through the mouth of the canal, dictating my course changes to the crew. Waltenburg only occasionally made an appearance, checking gauges and whispering to Arendt.

It was midday by the time we'd finished the canal run. Arendt then asked me to plot a course for grid reference AN 26. We increased speed to ahead standard, and the U-11 began to surge through the waves of the open ocean. The perfect conditions were to change soon afterwards.

czwij
09-24-09, 10:20 AM
good.
more puleez

sunvalleyslim
09-24-09, 12:59 PM
Keep up with a great story......:up::up::up:

Brag
09-24-09, 03:02 PM
Good writing, keep going. :up:

KPT.H0LZ
09-24-09, 04:28 PM
Good creative writing mate... interested to see where it goes.
Do you think of the plot on long sorties?, I dont think i would have the patience.

Good Job!

the.terrabyte.pirate
09-25-09, 08:12 AM
Even though the weather was mild, Oberleutnant Arendt ensured that the watch teams were rotated promptly every four hours, apart from poor Kaeding. I was sure that Arendt was taking personal pleasure in punishing the 2wo for arriving on the ship drunk the afternoon before. He was left on watch for almost the entire day.

Just before 1800 the watch reported a weather change to the North, and soon after we were set upon by a terrible tempest. We were hit with winds of over 10 meters per second, and rain so heavy that we could hardly make out the bow of the boat. The waves tossed the boat like a matchbox in a butter churn.

I can only imagine how horrible it must have been for Marbach to be recovering from a hangover atop the pitching, rolling conning tower, after a day of peering against the glare of the sun and the ocean. When he came down, he was taken aside by the Kaulein before returning to his bunk. He staggered back through the command room, looking pale and ill. Brunz joked that it was due the meeting with the Kaulein rather than his head's condition.

By 1130 the wind had increased to over 15 meters per second. We were forced to seal the conning tower hatch against the massive waves that would sweep across the bridge. The watch crew were too busy hanging on for their very lives to look away for other ships. I tried to sleep, but the motion of the vessel made it impossible.

A sane man would have ordered the ship underwater, but I do not think our Kaulein has any sense of preservation about him. We heaved through the heavy seas at ahead standard, the ship creaking and groaning with the stresses. I give full credit to Chief Marbach and Baldow, for they nursed the diesels through the night in shifts.

I'm was convinced that Waltenburg and Arendt are trying to break the ship apart. Hoffmann the radioman whispered that he too was convinced if Waltenburg could limp home with a broken ship, he would be transferred to command of a newer vessel. Waltenburg was warring against the establishment, and the U-11 was his ammunition.

Unable to sleep, I was tidying up my charts when Arendt bent over and asked me the current depth under our keel. I advised him 43 meters. He nodded to Waltenburg, and then hit the alarm and ordered a crash dive.

Chaos and panic ensued. Men scrambling to their stations were tossed about like dice in a cup, while the watch crew slipped and clambered their way down from the bridge.

"They're both completely insane" I decided as the diesels howled up to full revs and the bow sank sharply away towards the sea bed. I held on to the chart table, feeling vibrations from the spinning shafts radiate through the ship. The hull began to groan under the sudden rise of water pressure.

It must have been a matter of a few seconds before Arendt ordered an arrest to the dive, but it felt much longer. I imaged the sea floor rising to meet us, a jagged shaft of rock ready to puncture through the hull like a spitted pig. I felt the boat leveling out slowly, and the engines throttling back. Arendt turned to me. "Depth!" he ordered brusquely.

I checked... we'd levelled out less than three meters from the seabed. Three meters away from impact, flooding, and a quick death.

He nodded back at Kaulein Waltenburg, who I only now noticed was holding a stopwatch. Waltenburg pocketed the watch, and went back to ignoring us all again.

"Make depth 30 meters, ahead slow" Arendt demanded.

This deep below the thrashing waves above we only feel the slightest rocking. The electric engines are quiet, and the crew are taking the opportunity to get some rest. Kaeding slept through the whole exercise, and he's still snoring away. However, sleep eludes me, dearest Liesa. I can only lie in my bunk in fear of what the madmen will do next. I feel that the U-11 and her crew are to be sacrificed on the alter of Waltenburg's ambition.

At this moment, I pray that I will see you again.

Yours forever,

Hans.

sunvalleyslim
09-29-09, 01:24 PM
:up::up::up:

Captain Birdseye
09-29-09, 05:42 PM
Amazing mate, you really capture the atmosphere well. More!