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gord96
03-05-09, 01:16 PM
Oct 29.1940

Lt z.s. Gord Hieniken watched in awe as the small coastal freighter erupted into flames. She looked like a torch against the night sky.

"Keep firing Max. Let's put her out of her misery." Gord yelled down to his deck gun crew.

The first shell fired at the freighter as U-45 pursued had hit something very volatile as a large explosion followed and soon the whole deck was engulfed. Within ten minutes, Max and his crew had put enough rounds into the hull to ensure she was going down.

"I would say just a shade under 1500? What do you think Rienhard?" Gord asked his first officer standing behind him.

"I agree." the first officer replied. He was a good officer Rienhard was, but very short and to the point. Came from a proper German family that took its military heritage very seriously. It was a nice balance to Gord's more loose yet diciplined command style.

"My God. I don't think anyone made it off." someone said. It was true. They didnt even know what hit them. U-45 had tracked them for a few hours after picking them up on a routine sound check. When they got close they found themselves chasing her and in a bad postion for a torpedo attack. Gord decided to run full speed ahead and let his crack gun crew try their luck. The sea's were calm and the moon full.

"Say a prayer for them boys." Gord muttered. "Ahead standard. Return to previous course. I'm going below. Relieve the watch."


Below in his bunk, Gord layed down for a short rest. U-45 was on her second combat patrol under his command. They were stationed just west of Gibralter. They had been hunting here for days. It was like shooting fish in a barrel. Almost to good to be true as every few hours another lone Brit freighter would emerge from the straights, unescorted and without any sort of weapon. They had sunk five ships in the last two days. Gord figured they had another day or two of this before heading back towards France.

"Radiograms sir." the voice snapped Gord from his thoughts. The young radio operator handed him some papers. Gord sat up.

"Thank you."

He glanced through them. Seems other boats were having good success too. With an estimated thirty thousand tons so far on this patrol Gordo hoped to get his name further up that tonnage chart. He never once thought much of glory as a young officer, but after seeing the praise and celebrity piled on Prien after his raid, Gord was motivated even more the finish his command training and get his own boat. Now here he was. He put the radiograms back down and returned to his pillow. He pulled the white hat over his eyes and soon was asleep, dreaming of the day he recieved the Knights Cross.

Sailor Steve
03-05-09, 01:37 PM
'Happy Times, indeed!' Hope to read more of Kptl. Heiniken's adventures. And hoping he doesn't become too disillusioned when things don't go as well.

Good start!:rock:

nikbear
03-05-09, 02:31 PM
Like the writing style,very good start:salute:hope there is more to come:03:

gord96
03-05-09, 03:29 PM
Thanks guys. Glad you enjoy it! :D

2 hours later

Bootsmann Max Richter waited at the bottom of the ladder, waiting for the captain to call him and his crew to man the deck gun. Max was beginning to feel the pressure. He was hand picked by Captain Hieniken because of his skills at sighting a 8.8cm gun. His first patrol on U-45 had seen four British merchants sunk, three of them were finished off by himself and his two assistants using the gun. Upon return, Captain Hieniken personally awarded Max with the Iron Cross 2nd class for his skill and bravery during the September patrol. He had also sent Max off to get officially qualified on the deck gun. Now the captain expected results. And Max was afraid to fail him.

"Deck gun crew to the bridge! Man the gun!" came the first officers voice from above.

Max looked back at the two young sailors behind him. They were his guys. Fritz and Walter. They were proud of their success on U-45. "Let's go boys!"

The three men climbed up top in the dawn darkness. In the distance a large merchant vessel was seen. Max guessed about 3500m away. The captain gave him a nod and Max and his crew climbed down to their gun and took up their positions.

"Commence the attack!" yelled Hieniken. The boat picked up speed. Max could her the captain and first officer issuing commands to the torpedo room. At least the water was calm, Max thought. The last patrol was in the cold North Atlantic. The sea was rough, yet Hieniken still ordered Max and his crew out to finish off ships. They were tied to the gun to prevent them from being washed away, that was how rough it was. The captain had come to rely on the deck gun to save torpedoes. He hated to waste an eel to finish off a ship when Max and his crew could send it to the bottom with some well place rounds.

"LOS!"

Max felt a small jolt as two torpedoes sped off towards the oblivious British merchant. Max was ready. The gun was sighted for his first shot when ordered. The air was cold, but nothing like the northern sea. Down here near Spain the weather could be quite mild.

"Torpedo impact!" Max heard someone yell. He quickly looked towards the merchant and saw the second torpedo hit. Water shot up the side of the boat and an explosion came from the center.

"Commence fire! Fire at will!" came the order from Captain Hieniken.

Max and his crew went to work. Skillfully landing round after round into the wounded vessel.

"Yes boys! Yes! We aint missing!" hooted Max as U-45 continued to close on their target. Explosions and fires now spread through out the ship. Max could see men getting into the life boats. He was careful to avoid hitting them, aiming mostly for the waterline. Still a few rounds did hit the superstructure.

"She's going down!" he heard from the bridge. Indeed she was as the rear of the boat began to come out of the water.

"Hold fire!" came the order.


Three hours later Max laid in his bunk in the bootsmann's quarters. He was happy. Three months ago he had not even seen any real action. Now he had helped sink almost ten ships and was decorated. He was excited to get back to France to celebrate U-45's victorys. He fell asleep dreaming of beer and girls.

Sailor Steve
03-05-09, 03:34 PM
Max is the senior gunner, but still only a bootsmann. I see three possibilities:

1) He had a higher rating but was demoted for drunkenness or fighting (that happens a lot in the military)

2) He's new to the navy but he's older than some, and his experience shows

3) He's young and inexperienced, but in boot camp showed a talent for gunnery, so the captain gave him a chance and he put it to good use

No matter what the truth is, I both envy and pity him. A tough place to be in. Great story still.

gord96
03-05-09, 03:51 PM
#3 for sure. I actually wrote about Max in a first draft of this story. I didnt like how it came out so I decided to start the story a few months later. :arrgh!: I agree it is an odd circumstance that sees Max in that position, but makes for a good story. Can the young lad take the heat and pressure?

If the boat makes it a few more months then Max will see some tough times. And Hieniken will be forced to use more eels as more and more merchants will be packing heat! :DL

Captain Birdseye
03-05-09, 04:08 PM
Brilliant stories there mate :yeah: