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Brag
12-03-08, 02:51 PM
Lt. Fritz Gwitz writes:

March 1941

The boisterous seas were agitated like in a storm. That is because there was a storm blowing and it had been blowing for days. Despite the motion of the boat, which bounced about like a boat in a storm, I was calmly writing this journal.

"Neue funkspruch, Herr Kaleun," the radioman reported.
Balz came out of his bunk and read the message. "Freetown convoy coming our way. With this weather we can't see a thing." He snapped his fingers. "Bernaaaard, come here and give me some drama."

Bernard ran around the periscope clutching his head. "What to do, what to do. This is awful, What to do?"
"The great Balz will use his great cunning efficiency to dispatch a ship or two. Thaaat's what I will do. We will position ourselves with exactitude and perfectly to fire at a great ship from three hundred and ten meters. The Englanders shall not pass unharmed past the great Balz. Weather be damned!"

Six hours later in the rapidly fading tropical light, we lay in ambush as a great convoy rumbled all around us. Balz kept rotating the periscope and mumbling something. I stood ready to fire a torpedo in an instant at zero gyro angle.
We went into astern propulsion as a large freighter thundered right in front of us. The minutes passed.
"All engines stop," Balz muttered. He raised his arm while peering into the scope.
I held my breath.
We could hear a large ship approaching.
"Feuer einz!"
I pressed the firing button and the eel wooshed out of its tube.
Balz sat on the chart box, pulled out a clean pair of underpants out of his pocket and stared at them.
"What are you doing, I asked?"
"When I don't have much time to read, I read the labels of my underwear."
The roar of an explosion ripped through the hull.
"Wasserbomben," Bernard said.
"That was a torpedo treffer, you nitwit."
"They both go kaboom, so what's the difference?"
"Our kabooms are more satisfying."
"How come?
"Because they are ours, they kaboom with a majestic German accent.
British kabooms lack poetry."

The rest of the convoy went past without us seeing any targets. Balz plotted a course to overtake the convoy and attack again at dawn. We surfaced and raced ahead. The night was as dark as Churchill's soul, which being British, is not poetic. During a listening dive, we realized the convoy had changed course.

Dawn found us abeam the convoy. We estimated it would take us two more hours to be in attack position. Fog and rain cut the visibility to less than three hundred meters.

A shadow appeared. "Ship zero four five," I yelled. "Alaarm." It was a destroyer.
Expecting to get blown out of the water, we dove for the hatch.

"Hard starboard rudder," Balz yelled while dogging the hatch closed.

We were at thirteen meters when the destroyer went overhead, pinging. A second destroyer arrived on the scene. They had us boxed.

Balz put on his burgundy smoking jacket and walked around with a cigarette holder in his mouth.

A destroyer made a pass overhead, but nothing happened. Balz sat on the chart table and read his underwear.

Another destroyer rumbled by. We were now at seventy meters. It looked like we might survive. I took a deep breath and said. "We were lucky."

"Nothing to do with luck but the great and brilliant foresight of your commander." Balz pointed at the periscope to which he had taped a Don't Disturb sign from the Hotel Kempinsky in Berlin.

Hint: Kingmaker makes an excellent Christmas gift.

GreyFox
12-03-08, 03:34 PM
"Because they are ours, they kaboom with a majestic German accent.
British kabooms lack poetry."

Very good sir, very good.

Tachyon
12-03-08, 04:39 PM
That was nice Brag :up:...but shorter than usual.

Churchill would turn in his grave if he lived to read your anecdote.

ppk
12-03-08, 04:43 PM
Brilliant!

as dark as Churchill's soul...
:rotfl:

bookworm_020
12-03-08, 04:53 PM
Balz pointed at the periscope to which he had taped a Don't Disturb sign from the Hotel Kempinsky in Berlin.


Must try that on my sub!:D at least when they have tried depthcharging me, they seem to miss by a large margin! I'm sure 1944 will be a different story!:roll:

Sledgehammer427
12-03-08, 04:55 PM
you kidding? churchill was a lighthearted person, and had quite a large liking for the navy...

beautiful work Brag...i suggested to my english teacher that she should read Kingmaker. so there! haha, one down... 499 more to go

nikbear
12-03-08, 05:06 PM
Perhaps Lt. Fritz Gwitz is referring to Churchills infamous 'Black Dog' moods,which is somewhat poetic:hmm::rotfl:

richardphat
12-03-08, 06:46 PM
Man i didnt read yet, but im happy you decided to keep writting your journal.
I'll comment about that after i've finished reading!

coronas
12-04-08, 07:18 AM
Thanks, Brag! I listen "KABOOONS" in a diferent way: Nothing like the sound of German kaboons in the morning! :up:

Tachyon
12-04-08, 04:00 PM
Thanks, Brag! I listen "KABOOONS" in a diferent way: Nothing like the sound of German kaboons in the morning! :up:

Fart? :huh:

Brag
12-04-08, 08:05 PM
you kidding? churchill was a lighthearted person, and had quite a large liking for the navy...

beautiful work Brag...i suggested to my english teacher that she should read Kingmaker. so there! haha, one down... 499 more to go

Good Job, Sledge. :D

Laufen zum Ziel
12-04-08, 08:20 PM
Another great adventure from our WWII Hero.


PM sent...

Brag
12-04-08, 08:43 PM
Another great adventure from our WWII Hero.


PM sent...
Laufen, your site looks nice and is very useful. I am sure that especially newcommers will enjoy having the Balz stories in one location. :D

coronas
12-05-08, 04:28 AM
Thanks, Brag! I listen "KABOOONS" in a diferent way: Nothing like the sound of German kaboons in the morning! :up:

Fart? :huh:

:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:
Tell to Bernard. He could sinking ships with a new secret sonic (or chemical) weapon. :roll:

mcf1
12-05-08, 04:57 AM
:rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:
"Because they are ours, they kaboom with a majestic German accent.
British kabooms lack poetry."
:rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:
Balz pointed at the periscope to which he had taped a Don't Disturb sign from the Hotel Kempinsky in Berlin

Excellent, Balz just made my day better
Thanks. :up:

Jimbuna
12-05-08, 09:16 AM
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Brag
12-05-08, 01:20 PM
Another great adventure from our WWII Hero.


PM sent...

Laufen, I really like that Balz logo on your site. Nicely done! :D

U-46 Commander
12-05-08, 04:41 PM
Glad to hear that Balz isn't finished yet! Laufen, where ist der site that The Great Teutonic Hero Balz resides? I would like to see it!

P.S. KptLt. Von Awful is still recovering from the Noise of the gunfire, which was made by all the Balz fans. But don't worry, he'll be back!

xxx
12-05-08, 06:42 PM
Has Kingmaker been released in Britain yet? Should be a pretty good read.

Brag
12-06-08, 10:07 AM
Has Kingmaker been released in Britain yet? Should be a pretty good read.


Hi XXX,
Yes! Kingmaker is available from Amazon UK, a couple of Subsimmers got it from another location, too. If you click on the Subsim Store link on my sig, you will see an Amazon UK portal. This helps keep Subsim alive.

Let us know how you like the read :D

Sailor Steve
12-06-08, 05:10 PM
Laufen, where ist der site that The Great Teutonic Hero Balz resides? I would like to see it!
Click on his sig.

Sailor Steve
12-06-08, 05:14 PM
Another great adventure from our WWII Hero.


PM sent...

Laufen, I really like that Balz logo on your site. Nicely done! :D
I just looked at it...Me Too! Quite funny.

@ Laufen zum Ziel: Go to Advanced Search and put in Balz, with Brag as author and only Threads Starting With, and you'll get a full list of every Balz story, going back to the beginning and mostly in reverse order.

Brag
12-08-08, 09:27 PM
Lots of Balz stories on Laufen's site. When I read them, I wonder who is the idiot that wrote them. :roll:

Jimbuna
12-09-08, 05:42 AM
Lots of Balz stories on Laufen's site. When I read them, I wonder who is the idiot that wrote them. :roll:

I was wondering that myself http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1817/thinkbigsw1yo4.gif


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Brag
12-09-08, 03:06 PM
Lots of Balz stories on Laufen's site. When I read them, I wonder who is the idiot that wrote them. :roll:

I was wondering that myself http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1817/thinkbigsw1yo4.gif


http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4030/winkbigid2zj6.gif

Jimbuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuna . . .:p

bookworm_020
12-09-08, 05:24 PM
Lots of Balz stories on Laufen's site. When I read them, I wonder who is the idiot that wrote them. :roll:
I was wondering that myself http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1817/thinkbigsw1yo4.gif


http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4030/winkbigid2zj6.gif
Jimbuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuna . . .:p

You walked into that sucker punch with your eyes closed, chin out, saying "hit me!":doh:

Jimbuna
12-10-08, 06:27 AM
Lots of Balz stories on Laufen's site. When I read them, I wonder who is the idiot that wrote them. :roll:
I was wondering that myself http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/1817/thinkbigsw1yo4.gif


http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4030/winkbigid2zj6.gif
Jimbuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuna . . .:p

You walked into that sucker punch with your eyes closed, chin out, saying "hit me!":doh:

Sure did :lol:

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Brag
12-10-08, 06:33 PM
It all evens out with the Hoochie Woochie prinzip. Sink ships and get hammered on dry land, not at sea.