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Rykaird
03-03-07, 03:45 PM
January, 1941

Act I

In my cabin aboard U-123, my beautiful IXB, I open my sealed orders and find my mission is to destroy the HRN Averof, which Intelligence has said will be docked in Port Said. (My last attempt at the Averof ended in near disaster, so I guess HQ has decided to let me have another go as a “reward”.) This means I need to sail through the Straits of Gibraltar.

I load up on fuel from the milch cow Thalia in Cadiz. Rather than head southwest to the nearest deep water and then begin the traverse of Gibraltar, I decide to save a little time and take a shortcut due south across the shallows on the surface. Hey, it’s dark out – what could possibly happen?

What could happen is that I could spot a destroyer just about the same time he spots me, that’s what. I dive, but he’s on me, and calls up four of his closest friends. The five of them have me pinned in 40m of water and 18km from the deeps. I get blown to pieces.

Lesson 1: “Shortcut” is a Native American word that roughly translates to “The Road of Death.”

Lesson 2: I will never cross shallow water on the surface, even at night, in enemy territory.

Act II

So another Kaleun, with a name oddly similar to that of the corpse from Act I, makes the attempt. This time, the wiser, though still stupid, Kaleun makes the run through the Straits at 205 meters and 2 knots with silent running. I almost run out of oxygen after nearly two days submerged, but I make it without incident, despite my hydrophone telling me I am completely surrounded by enemy warships.

I consult my handy map, which tells me that in 1941 the aircraft patrols do not extend to the coasts of Algier. So I surface the boat. It’s a beautiful late afternoon, sunny and calm. I get out a deck chair, a fishing pole, a cigar, and a trashy romance novel, and enjoy the Mediterranean sunshine while heading east towards Tunis.

Unfortunately, some idiot in British HQ failed to inform the Anson pilots that they can’t fly in this zone. They come out of the sun, my boat lined up perfectly. I can’t even get the decks awash by the time they’ve dropped their bombs. Another Kaleun reduced to fish food.

Lesson 3: I will never believe again in Santa Claus, the Tooth Fairy, or the notion of an “aircraft-free” zone.

Lesson 4: I will always run submerged during the day unless the weather is so bad it will ground aircraft.

Act III

So now another Kaleun, again oddly with a name only slightly changed from the dumb ass corpses of Acts I and II, passes through Gibraltar. Armed with the knowledge of the doom of his predecessors, he’s very careful. Dumb as a brick, but careful.

Hydrophone picks up a merchant steaming along near Tunis. Since it’s night out and calm seas, I decide to take him on the surface with the deck gun. Rather than do a normal overhaul, I just get on a parallel course to him about 1000m to his starboard, and flog along at flank till I’m directly across from him. Oh, he’s a fat one – a nice, large cargo ship. What do I care if he sees me and starts to zig? I’m going to blow him out of the water!

Just as I’m ordering my men to man the deck gun, my Watch Officer calls out what sounds like “Schiff Ge-zeet-zen”, meaning he’s spotted another vessel. My greedy heart wonders “Is it another fat merchant? Oh, goody, Christmas has come early!” Three seconds later I hear the whistle of a shell coming my way. It’s a destroyer, leading the cargo ship, and I’m right on top of him. The good news is that the first shell kills my worthless watch crew. The bad news is that I’m rapidly blown to chunks.

Lesson 5: I will always personally perform hydrophone and periscope checks before surfacing, and visual checks before engaging.

Lesson 6: I will always perform my overhaul out of visual range.


You’ll notice that in every case it was my own laziness or carelessness that got me croaked. I still have never reached Port Said to even attempt the Averof. And I’m still in 1941.

It’s going to be a long, long war . . .

Torplexed
03-03-07, 03:51 PM
:rotfl:Very witty and well-written. We've all been there. However, you should probably edit it to a darker text. The only way I could read it was by highlighting it.

Mush Martin
03-03-07, 04:09 PM
Aaaahhh! The learning Curve She's Steep with this one.

Perhaps youd do better at checkers or parcheesey

put down the nice torpedo and step slowly backwards away from it.

It may be wise to move to a state that doesnt border the Ocean.

:rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:


(This wasnt meant to be poor no offence Kaluen)

kiwi_2005
03-03-07, 04:17 PM
nicely put and some good tips :up:

Mush Martin
03-03-07, 04:21 PM
A tip for each act:rotfl:..............(um ya):|\\MM

stabiz
03-03-07, 04:56 PM
:up: Nice read, Kaleun!

sunvalleyslim
03-03-07, 05:13 PM
great story Ry, is there a IV act?

Brag
03-03-07, 07:56 PM
A great read.
Looking forward to more!!! :up: :up: :up: :up:

You should enter the UBI writing contest.

JScones
03-03-07, 08:04 PM
:rotfl:

I usually don't read the "diary/story" posts, but this one was very witty and entertaining!

leeclose
03-03-07, 08:05 PM
A good read while im sneaking away from 3 dd's trying to nail me but have no clue where i am man is 2 knots slow or what suppose i better get a terry pratchett novel out to read.....:damn:

Syxx_Killer
03-03-07, 08:51 PM
ROFLMAO!!! :rotfl::rotfl::rotfl: Very well written! Maybe someday you will be able to make it to Port Said and rack up a little tonnage.:arrgh!:

Rykaird
03-03-07, 08:56 PM
OK, I've reached Port Said, but I can't find the Averof! It's Jan 21, 1941. I have GWX 1.02 and SH3. Anyone know whereabouts she might be?

It's kind of unfriendly in here. Doing the tourist thing is entertaining....

Mush Martin
03-03-07, 08:59 PM
OK, I've reached Port Said, but I can't find the Averof! It's Jan 21, 1941. I have GWX 1.02 and SH3. Anyone know whereabouts she might be?

It's kind of unfriendly in here. Doing the tourist thing is entertaining....

Umm take the lens cap off.:rotfl:

ReallyDedPoet
03-03-07, 09:04 PM
Well done Rykaird:yep:

Mush Martin
03-03-07, 09:05 PM
Dude Im sorry Congratulations on getting through it is an achievment
and Hecklers probably dont help

If it does help I got mashed a few times going through the straights
myself.

MM:|\\

Gezoes
03-03-07, 09:33 PM
OK, I've reached Port Said, but I can't find the Averof! It's Jan 21, 1941. I have GWX 1.02 and SH3. Anyone know whereabouts she might be?

It's kind of unfriendly in here. Doing the tourist thing is entertaining....
Wonderful funny writing at the start there! :up:

And good job for making it through! I know U-123 IXB well! Sailing a VIIC in the Med now though, I suggest you cruise between Valetta towards the East, great weather, deep waters and lots of merchants or two. Birds in the sky too, both sides :D

I can't wait to **** up at Gibraltar when the Italians keel over and the Med is abandoned ;)

leeclose
03-03-07, 09:42 PM
Port said not the friendliest of places and no tourist guides bah:damn:

bookworm_020
03-04-07, 05:19 PM
If first you don't succeed, Die, and die again!:dead:

:rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:


You just have to hate it when you get greedy and think your going to get away with it, the ax falls from above!:shifty:

leeclose
03-04-07, 05:21 PM
Yup that about sums it up:dead: :dead: :dead: :dead: :up:

Jimbuna
03-04-07, 05:32 PM
A thoroughly enjoyable read Rykaird :rock: :up: :arrgh!:

Sailor Steve
03-04-07, 05:35 PM
I want to challenge you on that first definition. I don't think that's right. My crew calls me "Captain Shortcut"...

Hartmann
03-04-07, 06:44 PM
Some more things:

Never go to the Med with a IX boat or be VERY careful

Never Raid ports (historicaly vas very rare,)

Dive during day

Rykaird
03-04-07, 07:09 PM
I want to challenge you on that first definition. I don't think that's right. My crew calls me "Captain Shortcut"...

"I don't think that word means what you think it means." - Inigo Montoya

Sailor Steve
03-05-07, 12:12 PM
:rotfl: :up: :rock:

Dantenoc
03-05-07, 08:06 PM
"I don't think that word means what you think it means." - Inigo Montoya

Are we looking for revenge on a six fingered man, or did I miss the joke? :)

leeclose
03-05-07, 08:11 PM
I think i deffinatly missed it totally by miles?????????:hmm: :doh:

Dantenoc
03-06-07, 12:42 AM
The origin of the joke :p (cranck the volume up a bit)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G2y8Sx4B2Sk

Funny quote, allthough the humor is lost without the proper context. :up:

leeclose
03-06-07, 08:11 AM
Aha got it and that is a funny movie:up:

stuntcow
03-06-07, 12:56 PM
Maybe the Averof killed his father????? Or maybe he is looking for the Dread Pirate Roberts?

"Westley? You have Buttercup on line 2 waiting for you." "Something about storming the castle"

leeclose
03-06-07, 01:48 PM
i would go with the dread pirate :arrgh!: