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High Voltage
02-11-07, 11:44 PM
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary,
Over many a curious sonar contact - strong and poor;
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a rapping,
As of someone gently tapping, tapping on the ocean floor.
'Tis some escort, I did mutter, 'feeling out the ocean floor,
Only this- and nothing more.


Oh how clearly I remember, it was in the bleak December,
And each one of my ship's members, was exhausted, bruised and sore.
Eagerly I prayed the weather - 'smaller waves would be much better
Merchant ships would be much deader, and we'd be heading back to shore'.
To that rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named "The Shore"
Nameless here for evermore.


Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no Captain ever dared to dream before
Suddenly the spell was broken, by words my sonarman had spoken,
'These escorts really are a-smokin!.. And I count three of them..no four!
They won't know what hit them, will they, nor what it is they have in store'
Quoth the XO, 'Nevermore.'


'Make our depth some thirteen metres, to our guests, let's be the greeters'
And upped the scope to scan and see which wicked flag they proudly bore.
Not a lamp nor light stood shining, thus I stared and sat devining,
Until suddenly I spotted lining, known around the whole world o'er.
The English flag's familiar lining, known around the whole world o'er.
She would fly, ah, nevermore!


'Flood tubes two and four and quickly, let's make this cursed convoy sickly
Send these wretched vessels, to the cold and clammy ocean floor.'
Thus I fired, barely thinking, three ships fates' I now was linking
Three true hits now sent them sinking, mortally struck them at their core,
Three torrid torps had reached three ships -mortally struck them at their core
Doomed them to sail but nevermore.


And my U-boat, diving deeper, turned many Tommies into weepers,
As she softly headed home to friendly forces by our shore;
No ship is safe upon this water, nor from sonar, nor from spotter,
Nor from gunner, nor from plotter, 'Allies! Stay home, I implore!
Eternity awaits you only, no friendly port, just heaven's door -
Victims of U-three-three-four!'

;)

_Seth_
02-11-07, 11:50 PM
:up::up::up::up: "The Raven" becomes "The Uboat"!

Torplexed
02-12-07, 12:01 AM
Excellent! My favorite Poe poem. :up:

TarJak
02-12-07, 01:07 AM
We are going to need a Poet's sticky soon at the rate these guys are going! Good stuff HV!:up:

Finback
02-12-07, 02:27 AM
Excellent!!! That's Great Stuff!!!

:rock: :up: :rock:

ReallyDedPoet
02-12-07, 08:06 AM
Nice work there, no apologies needed:up:

ReallyDedPoet
02-12-07, 08:09 AM
:up::up::up::up: "The Raven" becomes "The Uboat"!


and a title:up:

Morts
02-12-07, 09:50 AM
very nice :up: :)

Jimbuna
02-12-07, 10:11 AM
Das Raven :arrgh!:

ReallyDedPoet
02-12-07, 12:37 PM
lets put this one back up there:up:

deserves it.

High Voltage
02-12-07, 03:00 PM
I'm visiting my folks in ottawa and i haven't been able to play my beloved SH3 in almost a week now, so I've been getting my fix through Subsim. Feeling inspired again, stay tuned for another devious development in the life of U-334!;)

Rykaird
02-12-07, 03:28 PM
Simply outstanding.

CaptainAsh
02-12-07, 03:45 PM
wrong thread