NeonSamurai's corrections work quite well, but I noticed one serious (well, to me anyway) typo that he missed. It should be "trans-Pacific".
[edit] And a typo by Neon - "Spain was losing power...", not "loosing".
[edit] And yes, it should be either "rebel forces had risen" or "rebel forces rose up".
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