Just wanted to add; great story writing / story telling Neal.
I like the attention to detail with the map and pictures. Plus the various things to explore and find out. Greatly enhances the immersion-factor. Great job all round.
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Originally Posted by Growler
I know I wasn't a player, but I liked the POW angle - it definitely raised the tension level in the beginning, and became less important as other tension-raising aspects developed.
Just proves the adage: You can't please (or fool) everyone.
If life permits, I'm hoping to be in on the next slaughter.
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Well you got a fitting / suspicious user-name already..